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BIGPAPPA76 10-24-04 11:51 PM

This Ones For The Moms
 
THIS ONES FOR THE MOMS


from of ya birth she was always by ya side
she wanted to party but stayed home to seek and hide
this ones for the moms of this world who wanted more but settled for less
no one could ever expect you to keep it all inside on ya chest
but you did, you never hated or scorned
even when i fucked up in school you never for-lorned
you stayed near to me and thats just beein real
treated me like a fuckin king, would have givin me your last meal
but i took you for granted... didnt even want to care
you did your best with me, neglect? not even on a dare

this ones to the moms, the mothers of all the fuckups in the world
the moms who stayed home on fridays rather that go out wit the gurls
i know you could have done differant, i know you could have hated me
could have called me a fuckup when i dropped out but you beleived in me
and still i didnt care... i didnt see the love in your eyes
didnt know that you would take a bullet before letting me die
i was to busy beein filled with spite with my mind in a craze
to know that you really did care and you all ways have each and every day
this one goes out to all the moms who gave a shit
the ones that went to little league to see there sons first hit
for the moms who gave it all up for the love of that little face
when some would have been gone with out a single trace

when i look back on my life so far, i dont see much but one thing stands true
its that my mother will always be there no matter black skyes or blue
life moves on, and the days just fuckin fly by
never once have i thanked you, all this time ive been living a lie
i know youll probably never see this rhyme, you may never even know
but to my mom, i now see you for who you are and all the love you show
...this shit is for the moms who loved there child more than the sun
its for the only real hommie you got in the end, the true only one
to all the fuckups who feel alone and forgoten by this topsy turvey life
know all you gotta do is go home, give her a hug and forget the strife
this is for you mom, this is to say that im sorry for all ive done over the years
im sorry for all the times i wasnt there, the times i made you shead tears
i cant tell you how much you mean to me, not in a thousand songs
but all i can say one more time is, this ones for the moms


BIGPAPPA76

BIGPAPPA76 10-25-04 10:51 AM

ayo uppin this shit for some feedback please..............

Mad Dog 10-25-04 10:55 AM

This was quite good from ya...actually i was surprised by ya because soft topics ain't how i see BIGPAPPA normally when u battle it's a hard gangstas approach but u steered clear from that really well...flow was good but structure was a bit stretched in places but it's a good open mic some good rhymes and aight wordplay 8/10 because you surprised me :thumbup:

BIGPAPPA76 10-26-04 12:06 AM

i think the only reason that this has no replys is because its soft... i think its good tho.. lol.. uppin this

BIGPAPPA76 10-26-04 12:04 PM

uppin 1 more time

Loveliss Grandz 10-26-04 12:15 PM

good piece.it's cool too see sumthin' different and at the same time still hot.

BIGPAPPA76 10-26-04 01:55 PM

thanks for the feed hommie

Triple_N 10-29-04 04:25 PM

This was alot more emotional than the usual big pappa...but a touching subject...your story was nice..and from what I gather it was all true. YOu should show it to your moms....you misspelled a few words so u should try an correct those but other thna that this was a nice piece...it'd win you alot of topical battles....the emotion was just amazing man....good shit...just shorten it next time....lol


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