Blowin' Up
 

HOOK:
One day dis gon' be on da show Driven
cuz i'll be doin' dis' shit fo' a livin'
so watch out VH1 there's gonna be a collision
and u know dis is what i'm wishin'(2x)

VERSE:
Bitch i know i just saw it in a vision
but dis ain't Final Destination
dis' is just a matter of procrastination
but if i don't lose concentration
i'll be doin' dis after graduation
when i gets through wit' my multipication
so i try to follow everyone's recomenndation
these rhymes they just flow in like a Trojan
til' they end up explodin'
or i'll just end up implodin'
so my vocab just starts growin'
til' dis shit just starts flowin'
now i just let some mo' in
so i just throw in da nouns and adverbs
even some of da bad words backwards
u'r just assumin' dat there booin'
but really nigga, da cheers is what i'm consumin'
so dis da type of song i'm doin'
without a piece ruined


HOOK:
One day dis gon' be on da show Driven
cuz i'll be doin' dis' shit fo' a livin'
so watch out VH1 there's gonna be a collision
and u know dis is what i'm wishin'(2x)

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Its aight man keep on elavateing ok. :thumbup:

yo Fam. get drop feelin tha hook like hell, but you need to work on yo elavation..
don't be to plain put some extra feelin behide it then it be a 10/10. Ova all 7/10 good job

Quick rap As Club Manager

Don’t play with fools must obey the rules or leave the club
Can’t squeeze and hug a girl in here you better freeze your love

Habits, thugs don’t grab it in here, you can flow reminiscing but
No kissing, my job in despair while music revolve the air by cuts
From DJ as a club manager I’m a scrub damager that kick butts

Girls twisting and strut butt hey yall listen up, must buy drinks
Try link to her soul use dye or ink write a love letter get winks
Can deal with cutie but don’t feel the booty there’s kinks

In your game ask her name don’t let the affair shatter your
Air bladder, sip some rum and coke can’t be dumb folk pour

Her cup, but your place at school in to embrace the rule and
Taste the cruel fuel of love high octane in your tank and plan

To win her love, begin to thug wear blings and share things