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taken over 05-10-04 09:12 AM

(Hott SHit) LyricalMethod VS. taken over
 
10-15 lines
no hater, crew or dick rhydin votes
first to 5 wins and all votes must be explained

taken over 05-10-04 09:45 AM

yeah! its taken over bitch, you want hits i'm the dude wit em, i got him sick its like i spit flu symtoms. i carry guns hosta free, real as a youngen seen things i wasn't posta see, i's baggen up and i dont mean groceries, and i lost alot of my boyz that was close to me, thats why i clap at any cat approchin me, you get scared and sprayed in the air like polperi. while i'm supposed to be impressed wit your ice, i get you robbed every week for the rest of yo life. i guess i like rappers from the south but ill get their teeth snatched out for that platinum in they mouth. so you betta run like you on a treadmill or get feed still, if the knife dont take you then the lead will, oh you live, i'll show you how being dead feel. this nigga think he cute from his boots to his hair line, i'm so fly, i should own my own airline. if you blaze, i got haze, wit the hurb in the streets, man my strip ludacris, i'm disturbin the peace. this nigga drink buuz, i got write a album for dude where you shop, foot locker, i go to islands for shoes.
ONE!

LyricalMethod 05-10-04 12:05 PM

your rhymes lack heat like alaskan winters, you wanna battle me kid but just a beginer/
i close more battles that strobe and put more niggas out of business than Wal-Mart/
you don't bark you beat Ving Raines for the part in Holiday Heart/
you a fag, you undercover with undercover brothas/
you ain't real, you don't kill, i'll leave you face purple like prozac pills/
you gone feed me steel, you could murk a nigga if we played Double07 foreal/
you fake you the type of nigga that be in a room with 100 chicks and yell rape/
who you takin over, you wanna be hova, you ain't got no crank like a broken mower/
You like mase your flow is lazy, you don't faze me, you bout as soft as miss dazy/
you couldn't win if you voted for yourself times 10/

yeah you loss, i be snatching down votes like Randy Moss/
i drip fire like a naplam leak and get more ass than bucket seats/
im known in the streets, im known for the heat, you put space in niggas minds than missing teeth/
this battle is over lets the votes decide who's "taken over"

mc murder 05-11-04 08:04 PM

lyricalmethod only because his shit was more iller and thought up very well keep up the good rhymes sun

vote lyricalmethod

Metaskriptz 05-11-04 08:32 PM

yea I have to go wit method
Both had nice structure.....The balance and
similies was good....Also the metaphores....
Very understandable

Taken over work on some more stuff like punches.....You came alright
but not that hard as method....Nice battle for both aight....
Taken keep elevatin and work on the similies...aight

Replay 05-11-04 10:16 PM

method won
great connecting punches opener and closer keep it hot
taken over got taken over ha but just change the style it it will be good.
best line:i close more battles that strobe and put more niggas out of business than Wal-Mart/
you don't bark you beat Ving Raines for the part in Holiday Heart/
ohhh

the_crazy_one 05-13-04 10:50 AM

yo LyricalMethod won hands down taken over you need to elevate alot b4 you start battlin people who know what there doing

so vote/LyricalMethod

t-storm 05-13-04 12:46 PM

ok
 
lyrical method took this....it wasnt great...but the threw punches
which i dnt think the other cat managed.
taken ova for rhyming ya words i give u 10/10, but it didnt make sense
u need beta structure!!!!!!!
lyrical.........everything woz there ...jus cum harder nxt time
anyway
vote lyrical method


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