MaNiPuLaTiOn vs marvolousj1009
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

blind spit

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 08-01-04 at 05:59 AM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

aight im here bout da check in rite now.......................

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MARVOLoUsJ1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 05:35 AM.

MaNiPuLaTiOn has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 05:36 AM.

did ya'll see da shit dis hoe was just popin???,4 u goin gold is a option // cuzz ur saught of like a "lake nobody use" ya "flow is forgotten" //-1

i see u hatin talkin bout jay he suck,u tryin da play me but look at ya bar's u'z a lazy slut // y she agree da battle me well even dat "female rapper" couldn't give ds "lady-luck" //-2

dis habit is just mine,twistin faggets n punks minds when im rappin a punchline // dis chick got 7 wins neva went da elevated she keep comin "back" 2 da "front (lines)" //-3

marv cant rap? u mistakin him,u could manipulate dem other wun's but here i doubt u gon take da win // u ugly a dude would "curse u out if he woke up & saw ya face" now ima call u "rude-awakinin" //-4

scared da check in ya'll dis chick is nervous,cuzz her punchlines miss on purpose // look at ya "title" u cant keystyle & da "RV" in dat stand's 4 "(w)ritten verses" //-5

i dont mean da send her rage,but tell da truth u been afraid // while u writin 4 hour's my verse's be like dat "drink" cuzz they r "minute maid" //(made)-6

aight umm nuff i said 10-16 lines i spit 12

ima class-ik-fy u as HARDWOOD..coz u making me BORED...
so i knock ya jaw jus like ya crew..cos you both FLOORED..

17 losses..its a fuvkin joke u claiming "da sickest on dis site"..
aint even READY for newbs..a QUICKPUNCH turn out ya light..

u got no respect..always bitchin,n gettin yourself irrate..
you should migrate, coz even NEWBS tellin u to elevate..

you got d/r`s following u around like u captain dis ship..
when u tell a joke..u only stay afloat..coz no sides-split..

i spit quick,leave u more played than vedetta on sound-click..
ur style outta balance like a fat chick tryin ta standing-kick..

u banished..its my party..n u to beat is a "piece of cake"
at least when you leave here u guaranteed to ELEVATE




ok..beta explain personals
for u voters

bar1-hardwood classickz is his crew
wrk out the wordplay
bar2-READ/QUICKPUNCH..are 2 newbs who beat him
bar3- he was gettin worked up coz a newb was tellin him to elevate
bar4-wrk it out.
bar5-vendettas hot on soundclick
bar6-im tryin to say wen he go home he gonna take the elevator.

SORRY BOUT THA BREAKDOWN BUT WIT THIS WACK NEW SYSTEM I CNT USE LINKS

lmaoooo and umm im sorry da free post but i merked ready and me and quick punch battled like 5 months ago and u came on here in july which means ???

dunno wots it mean?????
hey i chkd ur battles n u lost to them both.
so there ya go.dnt try to sway,

uppin

This was feedback posted for MaNiPuLaTiOn
 

damm wish i could vote on this...tight ass battle................

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

took it with a all around better flow...the rhymin was on hit, and she never fell off, took the battle and ran, walked wit it...marv had a tight flow it was just choppy in some places, and some punches didnt hit as hard as manip.,

v/manipulation

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Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009

omg this nigga just annaliated that bitch fo real and i aint saying that cuz i dont like the slit i vote fairly.
breakdown
man all your pucnhes were weak and aint hit hard and your personals were weak also.your flow and structure was good and your vocab is the same you also had a good ender6/10 and a good opener 5/10.now let me tell you why you lost.
marv
flow snd structure good vocab also your wordplay was flawless
1st bar powerful hit 8/10
2nd bar also hard 8/10
3rd and 4th ber hard hitting personals same with the 5th bar
9/10
your ending needs work but otherwise you locked this
vote -marv better personals and punches

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136230 umm here go da link stupid....fake ass personals lmaoo come on u gota check battle stats whut type of shit is dat i merked ready and i lost da quick punch so stop it..

That Vote Is Gettin Removed....fukin Hate Vote...

U Really Piss Me Off.....i Wud Break Ur Fukin Legs,u Fukin Twat.
But Obviously I Cant.watch As U Get Fukin Hated On.dummy.

uppin 4 honest votes..ideally peeps who know wot they talkin bout.