50hater_killer vs SUPERVILLAIN
 

CRHYME SINDICATE vs. nok out kings

Battle Rules:

Topical: "Heros"
6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 250

Check in by: 01-27-05 at 11:13 AM

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50hater_killer has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-24-05 03:46 PM.

SUPERVILLAIN has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-25-05 10:40 AM.

Topical: "Heros"


"CLOVE STREETS FINEST"

Romey was the homie that lived around the corner on clove street...
He'd help old women with their grocery and was never known 2 beef
Whenever i peeped his report cards...the lowest grades seen were b's
In the times that i felt hopeless...the homie showed me i was worthy

He broke 2 records in track, and was crowned state champ @ the emporium
He graduated a year early.......and was appointed class valedictorian
My pal "the adolescent with wisdom" was easily accepted n2 princeton
Visions of lifting his family from their current conditions kept him driven

When he wasnt going 2 work on grave...he was doing homework all day
Saved up for a NY vacation...only then...2 send his family in his place
They couldnt make the trip during winter, so he set it up before november
When they went there...they perished...on that 11th day of september

Not only was this intense but he had 2 defend against arrogance 'n spit
He was unprepared for the hits...did i mention he was of arabic descent?
so romey left school and joined new recruits like he had somethin 2 prove
Boot camp went smooth...afghanistan got skipped and iraq was his move

the worse that could happen? a rebel faction ambushed his small convoy
14 out of 18 died bravely, under inept orders from cptn. john foye
Romey fought off the last of the guerillas...and kept the wounded safe
When the coast was clear they escaped, the nearest base...3 miles away

just before safety...another attack!!! moments build, more deadly...dire
they survived that, but 200 ft. from base...romey was killed by friendly fire
to romey adair...remembered as the bravest...a hero to all, so just face it
i tell his untold story below our pics, mounted respectfully in my basement


...the super......crhyme sindicate

it was this day where heros where made,
wars take lives but their souls did not yet fade.
They marched on for miles and took no fear,
and welcomed their enemies like headlights and a deer.
Bombs rocking in the distance and smokey lungs,
while they made their way with the sound of guns!
they faught for one thing and one cause,
and that was to give freedom and do it without a pause,
as the day grew weery they faught on to the death,
for I know that this field woul yet be their final bed.
for as I watched my comrads fall i knew that this was..
their chance to yet be called hero!

....................uppin dis shit gl homes.........

Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN

I got to give dis one to Super for da Heart he put in it and it was nice as hell he won hands down.......no hate to 50 but he merked u bad......jus keep elevating homie......Super ur shit jus grabbed me and made me read it.....i mean i looked at both of them but 50 yours didnt grab me like his did good shit dawg..........~1~

Return da favor please.........

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Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN

You are the best topical battler i seen.
There is no doubt at all.
If i was you i would be pissed off i wrote domething this good and it had to go against 50 hater's verse which is nowhere near as elevated or anything compared to yours.
On every count you took this. I am still stunned at your verse greatness

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you got this shit know doubt.....uppin for this ill nigga.....
CS

good lookin' out family and folkers. thank you very much for your support gentlemen. much love.

also, nice drop 50.......you did you pimpin'........im not mad at you. hold it down.

^^^UPPIN'!!!


s.v.

Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN

V/supervillain......this was a one sided battle super jus took this wit good punchs that were more creatively used he had better vocab an personals....50 u need to elavate u had to much basic flow no real punchs or diss's......
punchs=super
vocab=super
multi's=super
structure=super
opener=super
closer=super
overall=supervillain
*RETURN THE FAVOR*

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uppppppppppin dis shit yea super no hate here......

^^^UPPIN' FOR LEGIT FEEDBACK!!!^^^

...the super...

This was feedback posted for 50hater_killer
 

maybe you should make your raps longer. peace homie

Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN

SV got the whole bag.
SV:You came with the emotion, and the depth drawed me into the story even more.
Your structure was on point, so no problem's in following the verse.
Nice vocabulary, which is important in topical's.
Keep it up.

50:You didn't really post a proper verse, lack of depth, vocab and length, just improve your vocab and try to amplify your emotion..
So overall my vote goes to SV.