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DRAG~ON 08-19-04 02:37 PM

When It's On
 
ah yep
gotta feelin 4 sum killin goin down
spittin bullets like peanut butter on bread
.....................................all around....
not A clown so dont refer 2 me as Bozo
leave ya brain mo frozen over den eatin a
snowcone......
"2 fast" im on dat ass "2 furious" like Tyrese
wit machinery dat will leave yo ass decease
none da lease like a home dat got a family in it
n its a never endin story cuz im just at da beginin
9th inning and im in it 2 win it wit a home run
u movin 2 'slow' so my 'motion' is 4 a my gun
i bust 1 better duck son cuz im fully 'strapped'
like velcro shoe on retards are str8 jackets
after it after money u dummy dont knock my hustle
or i'll leave u wit 9 shot from my 9's 2 tense ur muscles
i'll "rush" like da "hour" wit JACKIE& CHRIS TUCKER
so literally u "runnin" outta "time" u ugly ass motherfucker
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Verbatim 08-19-04 03:03 PM

Not a bad peice, Flow was good for the most part
Had some multi's which was pretty nice
vocab was pretty basic but i don't give a rats ass about vocab, if it sounds good it sounds good ya dig?
Your wordplay was also pretty good...
good all around

return the favor, link in my sig is being mad slept on

much respect

DRAG~ON 08-19-04 03:04 PM

thanx my 4 da feedbak dawg
uppin 4 more feed bak

.:TheGod:. 08-19-04 03:06 PM

ya man good shit 6/10 also how you get thos little pics of them guys verbitim?

.:TheGod:. 08-19-04 03:06 PM

holla man

DRAG~ON 08-19-04 03:09 PM

yo thanx 4 ya feed bak seem ppl.
really feelin it uppin 4 feed bak


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