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anxiety vs One M.B.
Topical Battle
Topic:The Other Side Of The Story Rules:I don't give a fuck, just make it 20-40 lines... Good Luck Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 03-25-05 at 11:48 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
One M.B. has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-23-05 12:04 AM.
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yo man accept at least.... you got like 3 days to drop.
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BLAH CMON yo im not gonna start my verse till you check in... cos otherwise you could no show n shit
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anxiety has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-23-05 10:49 PM.
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Yo... This is a true story... My Dad is paralized, and I fucking hate him... People think I'm "cruel", but no one knows the other side of the story, the reason that I hate him... It's pretty fucking deep, i hope you understand what my mom and my brother and I went through... Only a child, seeing my mom hurt, it was killing me... Dad was never there, never assumed responsibility... Mom had a job, plus taking care of both her kids... Abusive husband, blow to her gut broke 2 of her ribs... Overwhelmed by rage, fuck, you should have saw his eyes... Apparently he didnt care, cause he never apologized... I cried when my brother picked my mom off of the floor... But she was stuck, because without my dad, she was poor... I didn't talk to my dad after that for weeks... Which he thought was disrespectful, so for that, i was beat... My mom and brother watched, unable to do a thing... I went to school with bruises on my face from his ring... Sometimes he was out on buisness, he'd be gone for weeks... I could hear my mom in the other room cry herself to sleep... I thought i could help, everything i tried was useless... And it seemed with each day, he got more and more abusive... But the final straw, that made me lose all respect... Was when he came hom from "work", with lipstick on his neck... Then he found out, that he needed a simple operation... But something went wrong, just one little vibration... Blood vessel cut, subsequently the doctor lost his diploma... It would be 8 months till my Dad woke from the coma... As a result, he's brain damaged, and will never walk again... I think it was meant to be, i think it was god's revenge... Put yourself in my shoes, you think I could ever forgive him??? Thats why both stories need to be told, before forming an opinion... |
Hmmm I was thinking of turning this into a track.. so I wrote it like one.. that’s why theres a hook.. n' shit...
The Other Side of the Story 1 Im tired of bein split, I might just need to quit ya know OMB but not who John Nigro is, i worked hard for this, i spent sleepless nights, destroyed my brain just for a need to write, almost six years now since i been pourin it out, stepped up from freestyles 'n i'm recordin it now, shit, people think i chase impossible dreams, woulda never thought i'd rap but it was possible see, ya gossip is weak, but i aint gonna lose my pride, i choose my life 'n i choose to abuse the mic, So yeah… I really spit, and yeah I nearly quit.. but that was at the start, when i was really shit, 'n now ya'll gonna judge me, if ya wanna thats just weak, fuck please don't listen to my shit if ya just beef. Hook i've spit about everythin with the rhymes i write, now i want ya'll know they guy behind the mic, You don’t understand, lonely and broken I stand, 'cos none a ya'll really even know who I am.. 2 people ask me, "OMB do you do what you spit?", of course i don't, shit no i do it for kicks, i can rap about whatever, maybe violence 'n greed, but thats the joy of a mic, there aint no silencin me, 'cos i'm usually quiet, you know, the back a the crowd, so this rap is my release 'n all the shackles are down, give me a pen 'n a pad 'n i'll vent when i'm sad, vent when i'm mad 'n then i'll even vent when i'm glad, 'n my friends'll tell me, i should try 'n get signed up, but i just wanna rhyme without tyin my mind up, freedom of speech is something One allows me, 'cos if you met john he'd probably shut his mouth see, i'ma split personality, confusin i'm sure, i got two alter ego's, yeah, who woulda thought, ya'll can call me crazy, say i'm off a my head man, i'm just tellin the truth, gettin it off a my chest, damn.. I got so much to tell, just hope my throat can bare it But there's OMB 'n John, please don't compare 'em, 'n don't go runnin’ ya mouth, all sayin ya know me, Just 'cos ya heard this track, doesn’t make you my homie I do this for love and for glory, its what im tryna’ implore, see, So this is just to give you the other side'a the story |
Look at our closers man... Good fucking topical, gonna be nice to see how people vote... I forgot your Mr. Multi, i shoulda remembered, and threw my multies in...
Goodluck man. |
Word this should be a good battle lol
Good luck as well. |
Lets get some votes in this bitch...................
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This was feedback posted for anxiety
is this really a true story?
wow. thats real. both were good drops. im not gonna vote on this one. |
Yes this a true story..............................
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Some would consider that bit at the start swaying -_-
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If i didnt put that there then nobody would know why I'm writing about that... The whole point was because I hate my dad, and people think im cruel for hating him, and i was telling "The other side of the story"...
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Yeah its all good. .
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