DangerousMyndLunatic vs creaTivitie
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-29-04 at 04:37 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

it ia a 15-10 lines.............................................

DangerousMyndLunatic has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 04:41 PM.

In shitness, you got the gold, from those dismal responses,
Now Your Untouchable? u were boned so stop the nonsense!,
You're a vile rapper who became a proud spokesman,
For The supremes, we locked your mouth, when u left it open,
Use Rapverse.com and search groups, with stand up comics,
You got 'creative material,' when we laugh it's fucking chronic,
My optics are drained when i cry, ur catastrophic,
Karaoke bestowed his pops with shame, and he can't stop it,
Your crap lines you proclaim make my lungs collapse,
When ever i'm down i just look at your format,

creaTivitie has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-26-04 05:52 PM.

Bitch you think your gonna merk me….lol you got shit twisted…bitch you got oyur panties in a bunch….hahaha damn this gonna be fun……..

realized that this was that femcee that started that wack crew full of bitches`
Damn….took a look at her record and I thuought my cpu had glitches`
Look if you flipped your record you would still be a wack emcee`
I was thinking bout fuckin you up………but I might catch a disease`
See I spit sic scriptures……..while you wisper sweet nothing in my ear`
Get votes for exchanging pictures………nah that wont happen here`
I CUMN with So much heat I hard boil the eggs in your in your ovaries`
Im a U.S killing machine……………..like our soldiers from overseas`
u’re the slut of RV… remember when you was passing out your number`
you spit that tired style….but im leaving you in n everlasting slumber


aight this is a lil something...hopefully i aint gonna get dqed....
aight no beef just a battle...

Damn..... Took You !!!.... To (5:02) .. Da Hell.. Lmfao!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

15Min Drop Was Suppose To Be.. ! :p But Is All Good! lol

nice spit..you came with soem heat but i think my personals mite get you..but good shit....

nah i was thinking of it when we posting in bitch slapped so it really only took a lil while to type it...becuz i just freestyle the whole time while im on the cpu...it helps..

Thanks BabeBoi' lol

Voted For: creaTivitie

i like both the verses but i got to give this battle to creativity for the plain fact that his punchlines hit harder Dangerous u did ya thing too but punches wasnt as good.

vote:creativitie

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Voted For: creaTivitie

both of you were good but this batttles was kinda close
DML: your verse was iight yup you had some good lines and you had ok punches and iight personals but i felt that yours didnt hithard enuf you had some weak lines but your structure and flow is iight
Creativite: i was feeling your verse more you had better punches and ok personals and ya flow was iight
Vote Creativite for a lil better verse

I wanna battle you DML
please vote on this battle its getting slept on
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Voted For: creaTivitie

creativitie took this one with a better flow...he had harder punches and shit, and better punches...altho he had a weak ending but he still took it in my book

dml had a aight flow. but some lines were dumb.."when we laugh its fuckn chronic"...i dont know bout it..but you did have some aight lines, and a couple punches, but you lacked in personals..


godd flow tho

creativitie took my vote

holla bac