Gimmick Battle: GKillaz 1-1 .vs Coke Dealer 1-1 -needs feed-
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I'm going 10, n i dont care whatever idea you wanna do...just post it up and i'll go with it.
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how about normal fuckin battle? checkity check check coke ... good luck man
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Fake fuck, g'luck what? in the jump, i'll make him one and done
N we didn't need a gimmik, becuase we all know Killa'z is one Wow n look at this, Stubb's must be pissed, i musta took a dive Cuz after i run through his name it just prove GK's still from 05 N if you read the rules correct, which i barely had done yet I'd post a link to your picture but your signature sums it up best My punches building in force, knowin whats in store is jsut scaryin ya Cuz his all his rap bridges collaposed like most of North America's N your right, on the mic you number one...and you also number 2 Only because no one's close to sucking that bad and wanting to battle you Stubb's next time give me some competetion, i'm pleading, just listen I think we'd all enjoy a battle, were you see someone other than me just dissing i went 12 g'luck GK |
uppin for GK .
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what the fuck man, DROP
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god damn it, drop a fuckin verus.
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Fake fuck, g'luck what? in the jump, i'll make him one and done
N we didn't need a gimmik, becuase we all know Killa'z is one this was a cool opener Wow n look at this, Stubb's must be pissed, i musta took a dive Cuz after i run through his name it just prove GK's still from 05 too played... N if you read the rules correct, which i barely had done yet I'd post a link to your picture but your signature sums it up best LMAO, good creativity in this one My punches building in force, knowin whats in store is jsut scaryin ya Cuz his all his rap bridges collaposed like most of North America's fresh concept and good hit N your right, on the mic you number one...and you also number 2 Only because no one's close to sucking that bad and wanting to battle you this was descent Stubb's next time give me some competetion, i'm pleading, just listen I think we'd all enjoy a battle, were you see someone other than me just dissing Good Closer -------------------------------------------------- You had a good verse in this battle. Alot of good wordplay and hits were in your verse. Too bad GKillaz05 didn't show. |
i hate this league...so so much.
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Solid verse here man. The only line i didn't like was to 05 line. Other than that the sig and north america lines was probably your two best IMO. not much to say to change except it'd be good if your comp showed.
feed my noshow verse with one real punch in it |
Fake fuck, g'luck what? in the jump, i'll make him one and done
N we didn't need a gimmik, becuase we all know Killa'z is one this line was weak, the punch was too obviouse and direct and lacked wit Wow n look at this, Stubb's must be pissed, i musta took a dive Cuz after i run through his name it just prove GK's still from 05 same here N if you read the rules correct, which i barely had done yet I'd post a link to your picture but your signature sums it up best I get the concept but the wording felt way off here. My punches building in force, knowin whats in store is jsut scaryin ya Cuz his all his rap bridges collaposed like most of North America's didn't see the punch here N your right, on the mic you number one...and you also number 2 Only because no one's close to sucking that bad and wanting to battle you lacked creativity Stubb's next time give me some competetion, i'm pleading, just listen I think we'd all enjoy a battle, were you see someone other than me just dissing cool but could have been better I think its safe to say this felt like a no show verse, not saying that it was but it felt like one. Coke, you should work on how you word your punches around your concepts. Some of your concepts have been done on Gkillaz before such as the sig punch. Not the worst Ive read but it is from you so step it up next week man. :thumbup: |
Coke wins 2-1 and is moved back to the main arena
gkillaz loses recieving his second loss. And is eliminated. You are the weakest link. Gooodbye! |
lmao cya Krissy ....
sorry coke ... been a rough few weeks ... no disrespect |
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