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Civil. 03-09-09 08:41 AM

Gimmick Battle: GKillaz 1-1 .vs Coke Dealer 1-1 -needs feed-
 
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Cola 03-09-09 06:19 PM

I'm going 10, n i dont care whatever idea you wanna do...just post it up and i'll go with it.

GKillaz05 03-10-09 07:03 PM

how about normal fuckin battle? checkity check check coke ... good luck man

Cola 03-12-09 02:10 PM

Fake fuck, g'luck what? in the jump, i'll make him one and done
N we didn't need a gimmik, becuase we all know Killa'z is one
Wow n look at this, Stubb's must be pissed, i musta took a dive
Cuz after i run through his name it just prove GK's still from 05
N if you read the rules correct, which i barely had done yet
I'd post a link to your picture but your signature sums it up best
My punches building in force, knowin whats in store is jsut scaryin ya
Cuz his all his rap bridges collaposed like most of North America's
N your right, on the mic you number one...and you also number 2
Only because no one's close to sucking that bad and wanting to battle you
Stubb's next time give me some competetion, i'm pleading, just listen
I think we'd all enjoy a battle, were you see someone other than me just dissing

i went 12

g'luck GK

Cola 03-12-09 10:34 PM

uppin for GK .

Cola 03-13-09 12:43 AM

what the fuck man, DROP

Cola 03-13-09 04:36 PM

god damn it, drop a fuckin verus.

LPMNDCTE 03-13-09 09:45 PM

Fake fuck, g'luck what? in the jump, i'll make him one and done
N we didn't need a gimmik, becuase we all know Killa'z is one



this was a cool opener


Wow n look at this, Stubb's must be pissed, i musta took a dive
Cuz after i run through his name it just prove GK's still from 05


too played...


N if you read the rules correct, which i barely had done yet
I'd post a link to your picture but your signature sums it up best

LMAO, good creativity in this one


My punches building in force, knowin whats in store is jsut scaryin ya
Cuz his all his rap bridges collaposed like most of North America's


fresh concept and good hit


N your right, on the mic you number one...and you also number 2
Only because no one's close to sucking that bad and wanting to battle you

this was descent



Stubb's next time give me some competetion, i'm pleading, just listen
I think we'd all enjoy a battle, were you see someone other than me just dissing


Good Closer


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You had a good verse in this battle. Alot of good wordplay and hits were in your verse. Too bad GKillaz05 didn't show.

Cola 03-14-09 08:01 AM

i hate this league...so so much.

fuck yuu 03-14-09 10:17 AM

Solid verse here man. The only line i didn't like was to 05 line. Other than that the sig and north america lines was probably your two best IMO. not much to say to change except it'd be good if your comp showed.
feed my noshow verse with one real punch in it

Wordz AhGod 03-15-09 05:42 PM

Fake fuck, g'luck what? in the jump, i'll make him one and done
N we didn't need a gimmik, becuase we all know Killa'z is one
this line was weak, the punch was too obviouse and direct and lacked wit
Wow n look at this, Stubb's must be pissed, i musta took a dive
Cuz after i run through his name it just prove GK's still from 05
same here
N if you read the rules correct, which i barely had done yet
I'd post a link to your picture but your signature sums it up best
I get the concept but the wording felt way off here.
My punches building in force, knowin whats in store is jsut scaryin ya
Cuz his all his rap bridges collaposed like most of North America's
didn't see the punch here
N your right, on the mic you number one...and you also number 2
Only because no one's close to sucking that bad and wanting to battle you
lacked creativity
Stubb's next time give me some competetion, i'm pleading, just listen
I think we'd all enjoy a battle, were you see someone other than me just dissing
cool but could have been better

I think its safe to say this felt like a no show verse, not saying that it was but it felt like one. Coke, you should work on how you word your punches around your concepts. Some of your concepts have been done on Gkillaz before such as the sig punch. Not the worst Ive read but it is from you so step it up next week man. :thumbup:

Civil. 03-16-09 10:19 AM

Coke wins 2-1 and is moved back to the main arena

gkillaz loses recieving his second loss. And is eliminated.

You are the weakest link.

Gooodbye!

GKillaz05 03-26-09 06:05 PM

lmao cya Krissy ....

sorry coke ... been a rough few weeks ... no disrespect


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