Made a big mistake nephew (shiest diss)
 

number 1 calm down wanna be jeulz santana, bitch talkin slobk but he reppin a green bandana/ wtf?

Cuzz u cant handle this blasting, t'was a fairytale story gettin here.....but this is a beating u aint everlasting/

there aint no need to curse, but seriously u are the worst, im flippin off wacC concepts heres a middle finger for ya NGN diss verse/

ur cheesy enough to make a mouse all happy, shiest? kid ure too scared to shoot ur mouth off directly at me/

fuccin geek probly read books and bein a rapper ur faking, but on the real u obviously dont know how much of a beating ur taking/

fuccin faggot now look what u did u got me in this beef talkin shit bout Crips son u dont wanna fucC wid me im tellin u dat right now ~1~

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...15&page=2&pp=15

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3105650

ur cheesy enough to make a mouse all happy, shiest? kid ure too scared to shoot ur mouth off directly at me/

That flowed nice^

But the rest was enough to fill my garbage bin....

Huh....................

kid i aint droppin my good shit until i see decent shit come out u cause all ya shit is wacC son fa real

ur cheesy enough to make a mouse all happy, shiest? kid ure too scared to shoot ur mouth off directly at me/


^^^ was awfull man....one hell of a poorly worded, uncreative punch....lame....you lines r to long....they wouldnt flow at all on a beat...ur vocab is lame at best...ur uncreative...bars w set up awkward..rhyme scheme is nonexsistant .....AND u act like it's good...AND its like four bars....of trash.............

YOU sir,,,SUCK

dog i could write a hell of alot better shit than this anyday but why waste it on this kid

Naw u Really Couldnt Faggot

his was wack, and thisd is on the same level.

yeh, elevate, quick!

Kilo i'll fuccin tear u up u bitch gotta come to RV to start shit u got it commin to ya now

Wow, I could write better bars in my fucking sleep.

^ me to..lol

i dont see why people are still reading this..its ..WACK!

^Word. I agree, work on your rhyme scheme/flow/punchlines/personals. Till then...

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instead of talkin shit LM and nicc why dont u leave decent fuccin feed like dude up hurr^^^

Well ..you need to work on EVERYTHING go back to the basics man..

It's lacking anything interesting... the lines are all just braggo/gangsta shit that has no appeal in text...go back and work on multi's, complexity, punches, all of that...then talk shit to me..slut