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Compose 02-04-05 04:51 PM

Anxiety vs Verbal Abuse (HeavyWeight Championship)
 
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Topic: Two Faced

anxiety 02-04-05 05:26 PM

AHHHHHHHHHH...

This is the battle I've been waiting for... Goodluck Verbal.

Shit is gonna be off the hook...

anxiety 02-05-05 08:07 PM

Talk shit behind my back... But to my face, your friendly...
You'd do anything you could to turn my friends against me...
Spit venomous lies, won't tell me, but i know you hate me...
Face me? No way, far too busy trying to manipulate me...
I tell you to give Dave a message, you say your on top of it...
But the shit you told him? Nah, i told you to say the opposite...
Your words are foul, undermining me, it's hipocritical...
Treacherous, almost to the point im bout to get physical...
Then he comes out at me, your the one that he defended...
While im trying to explain to him, i was misrepresented...
But after some fists fly, i dont think he believes me...
You were supposed to be my dog, now you decieved me...
I shoulda known, when i first started gettin suspicious...
Your vicious, every word you speak on me is malicious...
I been nothin but nice, so whats your reasoning...
That you go behind my back all the time deceiving me?
Then you actually got the nerve to say your innocent...
What the fuck dog, you think i aint got any sence?
You were the one trying to turn me against my homies...
Your phony... Come to think of it, you dont even know me...
Lonely... I can tell because your a fact grabber...
Then using it against me, dog your a back stabber...
Cant even count the number of lies that you spilt...
If you touched me, i'd have to rinse my hands of the filth...
And then cut em the fuck off, dog your repulsing...
Come at me again, and i'll come back at you in fullswing...
Start up a fire, and throw in anything you've graced...
The worst thing on earth you could be is two-faced...

eph 02-05-05 09:10 PM

check, good stuff. its always hard dropping, second. trying to think of a different way to interprit the topic...

heck good luck to you.

eph 02-07-05 05:55 PM

Two Faced

bruised & beating, i feel mistrusted like my jesus piece and...
your swearing at me, when you was busted, caught cheating.
my adams apple heavy, my breath against me...so i hold it.
trust me, it hurts more to hear ya hoe'ing than to catch a bullet.
how am i suppose to be calm, when your loving on paul?
theres only one step taken, when you got ya gun in ya palm.
and thats an exit. believe me, suicide is no depressant.
i'll be dead & off ya back, think of it as an early birthday present.
fuck this, im not the one who deserves death...im the victim.
your turn to speak...i'll listen, what exactly did you do with him?
stop crying & tell me the truth, i want to hear it from you.
look into eyes, i want proof. then tell me what it is i should do.
your parents had affairs, now you too...what is it, genetic?
aren't you gonna say something, dont you even regret it?
and i loved you, how pathetic. even thought we were perfect.
never thought this would happen, i hope it was worth it.
the day we met was a blessing, a step toward love's progression.
remember our first time? that night i sang you 21 questions?
after so much time invested, i ended up empty handed.
should've told me from the get go, after 3 years id be abandoned.
why are women so deceitful... it cant be me thats to blame?
cause my physical performance had ya wetter than rain.
wish i never gave myself to you.... ya lover and crook.
i knew i shoud've stuck to dating you, just cause of ya looks.
dont write or call me no more...& dont even knock at my door.
cause the only reason id get back with you, is to even the score.


Incineratedrose 02-09-05 01:56 PM

"I tell you to give Dave a message, you say your on top of it...
But the shit you told him? Nah, i told you to say the opposite...
Your words are foul, undermining me, it's hipocritical...
Treacherous, almost to the point im bout to get physical.."

^that was the best part of Anxiety's verse, and i think he took this, Verbnage, the rhymes you attempted to put together just sucked, and right off the bat i wanted to quit reading, i didn't feel any emotion at all, good try...

but i think Anxiety took it due to better vocab by far, and more emotion...

v/ Anxiety.

CounTREE Jay 02-10-05 11:11 PM

Anxiety's shit had a lot more consistent flow, and i thought he stayed on topic a lil' better than eph. I dunno, his shit just caught me up in it, readin' it and shit. I think anx took this one.


-CJ-

Compose 02-11-05 03:02 PM

Anxiety wins by KO at the end of voting (2-0)

Anxiety +5
Verbal Abuse (eph) -3


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