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[Regime] Sureal vs. [Verbal Rapists] Mentally Kursed.
This Is Bullshit, We Just Battled Had No Votes.. So I'm Going
To Drop Both Of The Verses We Had (Other Thread Is Deleted) This Is Going To Be Our Crew Battle |
First Of All Mentally Kursed's Verse...
---------------------------------------------------- aight check it This bitch is fake, the only way he spits real shit is when he eats his name then puke it out// (surREAL) ill send bullets through your body and leave fragments through out, my gat is givin you head but leavin you brainless leavin you wit nothin to think about// you typed your prewritten lines to hard, now your callin the match off, your hittin low keys like playin on a piano as if your fingers had blisters// im punchin you so hard im lettin your head spin like twisters, your not seein correct, look in the mirrior, all like you see is twin sisters// (youre a girl thats dizzle lookin in a mirror seein doubles) You say you merk wack emcees, well wouldnt that be suicide, takin your own life// Your shit out of luck, like poopin on lucky charms cereal and causin a strife, I want you to meet somethin, its the pointed end of a machete knife// Im a beast at rappin, fuck a mammal// I humped your girl, gave her back and mouth two lumps, (balls) then she showed me her tips of her feet and her camel// (camel toe) --------------------------------------------- Now Sureal's Verse... ---------------------------------------------- Mentally Kursed Only Way You Roll Better Then Me Is Backwords.. Against Me.. Cheating In Scrabble Still Couldnt Match Words.. Just Like Butchers At Thrift Stores.. Cant Cut A Deal To Win.. Like Mother Like Son ..He's Taking Hits And Shot's To The Chin.. Like Orphans On Fathers Day.. In This Shit I'll Never Be Sonned.. Meat Gets More Praise Then His Verse.. Cuz Steak Can Be Well Done.. Mentally Kursed, Just Like Premature E-Jack.. Accidentally Burst.. Think You're A Hit Man? I'll Leave.. So You Can Whack Off To My Verse.. ------------------------------------------------- |
^Votes Please For Our Crew Battle!
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SUREAL
Mentally Kursed Only Way You Roll Better Then Me Is Backwords.. Against Me.. Cheating In Scrabble Still Couldnt Match Words.. ------Nice Bar but the Scrabble line is kinda played Just Like Butchers At Thrift Stores.. Cant Cut A Deal To Win.. Like Mother Like Son ..He's Taking Hits And Shot's To The Chin.. -----------Sick!!! iLL punch Like Orphans On Fathers Day.. In This Shit I'll Never Be Sonned.. Meat Gets More Praise Then His Verse.. Cuz Steak Can Be Well Done.. ------------Nice Meta's but as 4 the punch itself....didn't connect very hard Mentally Kursed, Just Like Premature E-Jack.. Accidentally Burst.. Think You're A Hit Man? I'll Leave.. So You Can Whack Off To My Verse.. ------------------Good finisher Mental Kurse aight check it This bitch is fake, the only way he spits real shit is when he eats his name then puke it out// (surREAL) ill send bullets through your body and leave fragments through out, my gat is givin you head but leavin you brainless leavin you wit nothin to think about// -------------Decent punch coulda came harder though you typed your prewritten lines to hard, now your callin the match off, your hittin low keys like playin on a piano as if your fingers had blisters// im punchin you so hard im lettin your head spin like twisters, your not seein correct, look in the mirrior, all like you see is twin sisters// (youre a girl thats dizzle lookin in a mirror seein doubles) ------------^Bad punch man coulda came harder, nice multi's though You say you merk wack emcees, well wouldnt that be suicide, takin your own life// Your shit out of luck, like poopin on lucky charms cereal and causin a strife, I want you to meet somethin, its the pointed end of a machete knife// ----------------LMAO at that Lucky charms shit Im a beast at rappin, fuck a mammal// I humped your girl, gave her back and mouth two lumps, (balls) then she showed me her tips of her feet and her camel// (camel toe) ---------Nice wordplay, good punch here, but not a good closer Overall Punches - Sureal Wordplay - Sureal Multi's - Mental Vocab - Mental Flow - Sureal Creativity - Sureal Vote = Sureal Mental looks like U bit off more than u could chew on this one.....Good battle though Oh and Sureal can U Vote on my Pink Slip battle against Alias X, its at the bottom of the Elite Fronts list.....Only Mods can vote on the shit and the shits bein mad slept on...............Also both of ya'll check out My Battle against H4iku, dope ass battle bein slept on too........(Elite Fronts also) |
uppin fo mo votes
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Metas - Sureal
Multis - Sureal Punches - Sureal Wordplay - Sureal Flow - Sureal I'm think mentall kursed :) VOTE - SUREAL (complete murder) |
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Surreal kicked this with metaphors..all of them was tite some played more than others but real tite...strucutre and flow was hot...Dope verse
Mentally Kurse... Um your verse was weak...that's all Vote-Sureal |
^^lol comin from a dude whois 12-22 and sayin someones weak lol anyways no hate tho
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Ay me and sureal aint the best of friends but i gotta give it to him
Mentally Kursed, Just Like Premature E-Jack.. Accidentally Burst.. Think You're A Hit Man? I'll Leave.. So You Can Whack Off To My Verse.. ouch! Multi's-Kursed Meta's-Kursed Punches-Kursed Flow-Sureal Personals-Kursed Ay yo overall Kursed you had more of the stuff but your lines where so fucking stretched i had to fucking give it to sureal fam...try to shorten your lines. Vote-Sureal |
^^thanks u for the honest well explained feedback even tho it wasnt for me im not bitchin but pot1ent can u explain ur vote better u jus said better metas like explain it better please
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UP FINISH THIS TODAY
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up old Shit For The 5-0!
up old Shit For The 5-0! up old Shit For The 5-0! up old Shit For The 5-0! up old Shit For The 5-0! |
cant vote but all i can say is : SICK BATTLE!
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