14. MaRVJay1009 Vs. 26. Invektive
 

Rules:

Battles Go Up On Wednesday, Check Ins Are Due Friday Before 11:59 PM EST. Verses Are Due Sunday Before 11:59 PM EST.

12 Lines
No Biting
No Recycling
No Feeding


You May Go 10 Lines If You Would Like But 12 Is The Maximum


Good Luck

check............

checkin in.........................

lol u back again?,i could c our battle aint leave dis kid shook.
but da day u 'Da-FEET' me ppl a start 2 believe in "big-FOOT".
prick look!...u been here for a while now still aint got hot quote.
invek's a "clumbsy drug dealer" datz only way he'll "drop-dope".
ya moms is whut u call a junkie,fam stop u get more wack & borin monthly.
i cant lose so if they say "your-up" they talkin bout da "foreign country".
IN-vektive ya punches r IN-effective u IN-active..whuts goten IN-to you?
ur IN-sane u neva been IN- da booth fukk rap look 4 a job IN-terview.
ya parents shouldn't of had IN-tercourse,as a noob u was spittin recless.
till U GOT KOED By ME,and did like a "shy dj" and "hide ya record".
started doin audio's now u focus rite?,nope asshole u aint close 2 nice.
invektive ya 'LP wont work'..n why? u name dat shit a "a BROKEN MiC".*
invektive a thug? nah he's pussy rv u'll find dis head shook in da house.
i dont mean "the ENERGy DRiNK" but u stay with "RED BULL in ya mouth".

its 12:02 EST.

whuts hood???

lol @ some of your played ass punches......


it may be coincidence...but i think your sig holds a true meaning
Nas holds that number up 4 a reason...its the round your leaving
he's been texting for years...Marvin's cartoon seems fact now
he never spits over a beat...the martians mouth is blacked out
Marv's verses put me to sleep..his text is my therapy meditator
in rap...your going nowhere...like putting Slinky's on Escalators
son, your not on my level...your garbage; clearly seein defeat
and you couldnt get caught up, even if u put Usher's CD on repeat
Marv left TE in search to command..but he was put to silence
how can you be the general of a crew...when u have no privates?
your ranked higher...but we all know Goliath has just got to fall
cause.............................
your chances are like "9's blastin Shaq"..u dont have a "shot a tall"

ahh its only 11 where im at...i didnt know it was Eastern..i was just thinkin midnight....oh well...i dont think it really matters all that much...if it does to you...then get me dq'd...its whatever...

lol @ nigga waited 2 see my verse..then drop

but if u would read da rules u would see da 11:59 EST.

damn someone vote on this....

I find this to be a very retarded post by yourself.. He made a mistake and thought it was only 11:00 his time...

Wow..he dropped 5 minutes late...

It's funny because you say...Waited to see my verse before he dropped...yet you tried do the same thing by posting right before 12:00...

^ Think before you post..

Hot drops by both of you though...I think this should be voted on...not a DQ..

actually you are both wrong the due date was 11:59 estrn time 2 days ago you idiots because its now tuesday morning over on the east and it was due sunday night...

^^^fam....da verses were due...on sunday rite?...sunday was may 8th...look at my post

lol @ common....we both dropped the night it was due...mine was just like 2 or 3 min late

MARVJ

lol u back again?,i could c our battle aint leave dis kid shook.
but da day u 'Da-FEET' me ppl a start 2 believe in "big-FOOT".
GOOD CONCEPT...COULDVE BEEN WRITTEN BETTER...6/10
prick look!...u been here for a while now still aint got hot quote.
invek's a "clumbsy drug dealer" datz only way he'll "drop-dope
PLAYED CONCEPT...3/10
ya moms is whut u call a junkie,fam stop u get more wack & borin monthly.
i cant lose so if they say "your-up" they talkin bout da "foreign country".
NICE...8/10
IN-vektive ya punches r IN-effective u IN-active..whuts goten IN-to you?
ur IN-sane u neva been IN- da booth fukk rap look 4 a job IN-terview.
NOT REALLY...EFfective...4/10
ya parents shouldn't of had IN-tercourse,as a noob u was spittin recless.
till U GOT KOED By ME,and did like a "shy dj" and "hide ya record".
LOL...7/10
invektive a thug? nah he's pussy rv u'll find dis head shook in da house.
i dont mean "the ENERGy DRiNK" but u stay with "RED BULL in ya mouth".
GOOD PERSONAL...6/10

IM NOT VOTIN ON THE OTHER BAR BECUZ FLOW SAID 12 LINES AND U DID 14.....

OVERALL-34/60

INVEKTIVE

it may be coincidence...but i think your sig holds a true meaning
Nas holds that number up 4 a reason...its the round your leaving
GOOD....6/10
he's been texting for years...Marvin's cartoon seems fact now
he never spits over a beat...the martians mouth is blacked out
NOT FEELIN IT...4/10
Marv's verses put me to sleep..his text is my therapy meditator
in rap...your going nowhere...like putting Slinky's on Escalators
PLAYED CONCEPT...3/10
son, your not on my level...your garbage; clearly seein defeat
and you couldnt get caught up, even if u put Usher's CD on repeat
NNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOO...0/10
Marv left TE in search to command..but he was put to silence
how can you be the general of a crew...when u have no privates?
EHHHH...3/10
your ranked higher...but we all know Goliath has just got to fall
cause.............................
your chances are like "9's blastin Shaq"..u dont have a "shot a tall"
BLAH...5/10

OVERALL-21/60

V/MARVJAY

marv
lol u back again?,i could c our battle aint leave dis kid shook.
but da day u 'Da-FEET' me ppl a start 2 believe in "big-FOOT".
decent open.
prick look!...u been here for a while now still aint got hot quote.
invek's a "clumbsy drug dealer" datz only way he'll "drop-dope".
played.
ya moms is whut u call a junkie,fam stop u get more wack & borin monthly.
i cant lose so if they say "your-up" they talkin bout da "foreign country".
good way to stay in depth.
IN-vektive ya punches r IN-effective u IN-active..whuts goten IN-to you?
ur IN-sane u neva been IN- da booth fukk rap look 4 a job IN-terview.
good idea, bad finish.
ya parents shouldn't of had IN-tercourse,as a noob u was spittin recless.
till U GOT KOED By ME,and did like a "shy dj" and "hide ya record".
ok, i'll take it.
started doin audio's now u focus rite?,nope asshole u aint close 2 nice.
invektive ya 'LP wont work'..n why? u name dat shit a "a BROKEN MiC".*
no.
invektive a thug? nah he's pussy rv u'll find dis head shook in da house.
i dont mean "the ENERGy DRiNK" but u stay with "RED BULL in ya mouth".
haha. good.

*aight, verse was 40-50. most of ya
bars were good, well over decent, had
some comedy in them. some bars just
didnt cut it. but overrall you had a good
verse.

invektive
it may be coincidence...but i think your sig holds a true meaning
Nas holds that number up 4 a reason...its the round your leaving
good way to include the sig. thats a must
he's been texting for years...Marvin's cartoon seems fact now
he never spits over a beat...the martians mouth is blacked out
what?
Marv's verses put me to sleep..his text is my therapy meditator
in rap...your going nowhere...like putting Slinky's on Escalators
ok, had some depth.
son, your not on my level...your garbage; clearly seein defeat
and you couldnt get caught up, even if u put Usher's CD on repeat
why would he want to be caught up?
good punch, but how does this apply? FILLER.
Marv left TE in search to command..but he was put to silence
how can you be the general of a crew...when u have no privates?
decent.
your ranked higher...but we all know Goliath has just got to fall
cause
your chances are like "9's blastin Shaq"..u dont have a "shot a tall"
aight, good finish.

*verse was decent, you came with good
punches and bad ones. you had good
flow the entire verse, which is a plus.
i liked ya style, but a few of ya bars were
simply fillers. so im gonna have to give it
to marv.

vote: marv

good verses yall, good luck to both.

-eph