Natural killa vs Street Disciple
 

Battle Rules:

10-16 Bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Blind Spit

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 11-12-05 at 10:03 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.


Expired battle close - win

Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-12-05 09:33 AM.

Street Disciple has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-12-05 09:33 AM.

You got your head up ya' ass,cuz none respond to ou..?..fuck,this newb's sad,
Cuz kid, It's not that their scared..it's just that they know you suck really bad
You musta had..someone tell you that you should lighten up at least,dude,
Cuz it's nutin with front lines,it's just people don't reply to wackness like you
It's hurts,but it's truth,your the worst,get it through..ya head,fore' I board-em',
But don't think you special or nutin..cuz I'm only battling you outta boredom
So go sort 'em..out,you know..them pre-writtens ya' got stacked,from the other day,
But your ARE a bonafide Disciple..but that's cuz you only follow what other's say
On a regular base-..is,being wack your niche'?..cuz you won't win in this by a mile,
& I see you put the street in ya' name..but there's none in ya' lifestyle
I don't even think this is worthwhile..cuz from your side,I ain't heard shit,
Ya' Put 100 posts to vote in this this..but why?..cause YOU sure ain't worth it
Ya'll End up murdered,your qoute's the worst in my verse..cuz dude,ya making sick
& Your only badtalking the pussy in that dude cause you wanted the dick,
Your a bitch..straight up,for real..just not close a man..so get raided by this shotty,
Cuz to me,this whole verse........................is just 16 lines wasted on a nobody

His shit ain't all that, only thing he can spit is a buncha wack ass verses
Sounds just like 50 Cent, just a bunch-uh-bullshit rhymed over curses
Check it, this nigga should've known I'm like smoke, I'm the only Natural Killa
Verses I drop are so graphic, he thought he was havin flash backs of the thrilla
All of his shit is free, but at most none of them got any style
Just like the bums on the street, you'll find his played out punch lines piled
In all of his rhymes, and the shitty small verses that you'll see him drop
Claimin he hood but got as much credit there as the racist cops
He got no skills at all, to beat his bitch ass all I had to do was cough
Cus BG's company fits description of nk's dick, rap style and length perfectly, microsoft
He rocks the username, but he's just another e-thug wannabe shady
And his raps make as much sense as babble comin from a newborn baby
This nigga thought I was a no-sho but my shit gon keep him surpised
He's garbage at life and rappin, in ten years he'll be makin me fries
This nigga couldn't rhyme himself outta a fuckin basket
So I put this bitch to rest, textal assult left him in an open casket

Voted For: Street Disciple

VOTED 4: Street Desciple

Overall:
Street Disciple's shit was tighter,
if we voted based on weight, then shit, Killa's shit was lighter
i aint just tryin to rep cuz he bumped mine
but lyrically his lines were like hard crimes doing mad time
...........mad harder

...Killa, ur shit was still good...for real...u packed a good punch..can u get ur font to get bigga when u drop a verse...shit ima need to get glasses if i keep voting ur shit

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Disciples Best Lines:
In all of his rhymes, and the shitty small verses that you'll see him drop
Claimin he hood but got as much credit there as the racist cops

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Killa's Best Lines:
On a regular base-..is,being wack your niche'?..cuz you won't win in this by a mile,
& I see you put the street in ya' name..but there's none in ya' lifestyle

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