_LM_ vs flow verse
 

Battle Rules:

8 - 12
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-14-06 at 11:17 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

flow verse has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-13-06 11:19 PM.

_LM_ has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-14-06 05:48 PM.

I Awesome With Raps...Enlighten Dude's I'm A Vet..
You Would Think I Get Negative Feed..
..The Way I'm Awe Full With The Text...
Took A Break Since I Started Writing At Six..
As The Pen Drops..This Damn Ock..
..Will Read This Like "I Shoulda Started Riding His Dick.."
Bombing The Real...This Fag Outta Be Killed..
He Wack..I'm Like A Patient In Chemo..
..Obviouslly Ill..
Dude You Can Hate..But You'll Lose To The Greats..
Potential, Rhymes Could Be Dope...
..If you Should Em With Base..
This Bitch Is A Herb Flippin Nerds..Do Your Best
.. But Your Verse Couldn't Flow Right...
Shifted The Words To The Left...
Your Next Best, Bitch? Nah You Aint Rattle Tec's Kid..
You Aint Carry Guns..
..But I Run Up With 6-9's Like Ya Record...
Never Hot Watch What I Do To You This Fucker Bitchin...
Go Platinum?..
Dawg You Couldn't Go Aluminum In My Mother's Kitchen..
Notepads Ignition..Easy To See I Key Every Verse..
Man He Better Learn..
It's Obvious..Like Daisies To Weed..We All Seen Better Herbs..
So You More Wack Than The Wackest Men.
Get Attacked Again But Fuck Slaughtering Verse..
..I'll Leave That To Jin..

Eh I Got a Headache..lol

L-ame M-uthafucka L-acks M-ind
But wants to come @ mine
First you need to elevate your rhymes

This is my work & all I’m about
Do I come to you job and get loud
Smacking dicks out your mouth

NO cur I understand thats ur domain
But u wanted me to drop on ur ass like rain
Ur rhymes just go in circles no wonder they pointless
U Shit ur pants @ the site of a flow’s verse and gets stress

I came on the site and After I drop my verse
All he was felling was mega hertz

Saw that I won this Cur I aint no half ass new comer___
Your last opponents gave you an inch and now u think u're a ruler__Na!!

good luck ...

Voted For: _LM_

L-ame M-uthafucka L-acks M-ind
But wants to come @ mine
First you need to elevate your rhymes
(eh)
This is my work & all I’m about
Do I come to you job and get loud
Smacking dicks out your mouth
(eh...k just as generic as the 1st set)
NO cur I understand thats ur domain
But u wanted me to drop on ur ass like rain
Ur rhymes just go in circles no wonder they pointless
U Shit ur pants @ the site of a flow’s verse and gets stress
(eh...same as above man...spice it up a lil with some metas and wordplay my man)
I came on the site and After I drop my verse
All he was felling was mega hertz
(k....there we go a lil progress)
Saw that I won this Cur I aint no half ass new comer___
Your last opponents gave you an inch and now u think u're a ruler__Na!!
(delivery sucked here...but ok attempt)





I Awesome With Raps...Enlighten Dude's I'm A Vet..
You Would Think I Get Negative Feed..
..The Way I'm Awe Full With The Text...
(braggo ish, but nice wordplay)
Took A Break Since I Started Writing At Six..
As The Pen Drops..This Damn Ock..
..Will Read This Like "I Shoulda Started Riding His Dick.."
(lol ok)
Bombing The Real...This Fag Outta Be Killed..
He Wack..I'm Like A Patient In Chemo..
..Obviouslly Ill..
(braggo ish....coo play to)
Dude You Can Hate..But You'll Lose To The Greats..
Potential, Rhymes Could Be Dope...
..If you Should Em With Base..
(nice ...coo wordplay)
This Bitch Is A Herb Flippin Nerds..Do Your Best
.. But Your Verse Couldn't Flow Right...
Shifted The Words To The Left...
(k)
Your Next Best, Bitch? Nah You Aint Rattle Tec's Kid..
You Aint Carry Guns..
..But I Run Up With 6-9's Like Ya Record...
(coo personal)
Never Hot Watch What I Do To You This Fucker Bitchin...
Go Platinum?..
Dawg You Couldn't Go Aluminum In My Mother's Kitchen..
(lmao damn)
Notepads Ignition..Easy To See I Key Every Verse..
Man He Better Learn..
It's Obvious..Like Daisies To Weed..We All Seen Better Herbs..
(whooo)
So You More Wack Than The Wackest Men.
Get Attacked Again But Fuck Slaughtering Verse..
..I'll Leave That To Jin..
(oooooo nice ender)


v- LM.....harder personals...had direction....wordplay...punches....solid verse
verse was very generic......didnt seem too cocky or had the killer instinct....keep elevatin homie...learn from this battle

thanks for the feed back................... upping

This was feedback posted for flow verse
 

Eastside High rise...................................

la di da di we like to party...slick rick (my schoolin)

upping this ...............

uppin ..............

Voted For: _LM_

umm yeah completly one sided...if he wants me to come back and break down my vote i will...but dude just got merked...hard

Can someone kill this damn battle its been up for months damn,....

i would say upping but that don't matter... CUs this been up since moses parted the red sea...

This was feedback posted for _LM_
 

this was really one sided.. LM obviously knew what he was doin.. and flow verse still a little new. self glory in battles doesn't mean anything its all about being personal... ha that one about slappin the dicks out his mouth at work made me laugh though..