Flow 2 Crazy Vs. Magic
 

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When i walk in the park i enjoy staring off into the sky~
Taking in its beauty and watching the birds fly by~
The clouds change shape like an impersonater~
From a flower one minute then the next its an alligator~
The trees sway from side to side in the light breeze~
The best thing about nature is its around whenever i please~
As the seasons change so do the color of all the leaves~
From a red to a brown the variations are amazing~
Just by lookin at them you can feel ur spirits raising~
The colors are vibrant like they just jumped off a marker~
As the night comes around now its just a little bit darker~
After all the leaves are gone the snow creeps~
Like a blanket it covers the ground lightly as it sleeps~
Just like people every snowflake is unique~
Now the grass is starting to look like a mountain peak~
The color laying on the ground lights up the night~
Somehow the snow just seems to enhance ur sight~
As the snow melts the cycle starts itself again~
And hibernating animals begin to crawl out of their den~
Its similar to the rebirth of the whole planet~
From the grass way down to the granite~
Time to watch another sunset off in the distance~
And the rainbow that comes and goes in complete silence~

Sun shining overhead, bringing life to all god’s creations
Life is my biggest pleasure, its around in every direction

It’s amazing when the Smallest Flowers pollinates
Reproducing seeds that travel by wind to repopulate

Areas of rainforests untouched by man, are peaceful
It’s like the earth is unmarked to me that’s is beautiful

The way the tiny trickles of water drip from waterfalls
Every drop as important,,.. every drop as meaningful

Not feeling this one, sorry fam got block,,..

v/ flow for the more complex, deeper, story that followed the topic better....

Flow:

your emotion was nice I was liking it a bit.......
depth went nicely with the drop aswell as the descriptions
not much originality but the other categories
made up for lacking it that............................

Magic: well you had vocab of course..............
sort of original but I have to say it was far too
short to have a chance with another verse....
sorry I understand you couldn't think of anything...

so...

vote: Flow

Daym, I Like Being The First Vote Cuz Then I'm Not Repeating...
But Flow Just Did More With This Topic And Had The Basic Topical Skills Down Through Out The Piece...
Vote: Flow...
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