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butters vs .Fatal Lyricist.
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10 - 12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 01-13-05 at 04:24 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Butters has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-10-05 05:01 PM.
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Fatal who? your not legendary, i mean pssh look at ya rec... Pushing paper huh?...dont mean you can handle & master the text... Check yaself brother..cos you bout to be dropped, & dismembered... Lopsided battle...ill leave fatal in the shade..more than his avys rendered... Picked on this noob, but you got the wrong end of the stick... You set this battle not knowing my skill, Cos ill literally step on ya clique... I stand firm, throw ya punch's at me kid...cos they just get deflected... But fatal claimed he was ill....cos he got a lifetime prescription of anti-septics... Ill put holes in your verse, leaving it looking like a site under construction... Many words can describe you, like "You suck", like Gary coleman & Liposuction... aight that was wack i had to do this in 10 minutes, but ill rtf on a honest vote...dont get the wordplay? then fuck off. |
you better show bitch....and do my sig..this fucking 50 characters!
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who da fuk is you talkin to fam....u gonn get merked fo dat haha..this is my check -1-
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.Fatal Lyricist. has ACCEPTED this battle on 01-11-05 01:09 PM.
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just drop your fucking verse hoe...im in need of a good laugh.
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Hehe nigga talkin wreckless
Listen lil nigga u cood catch 2 thru ya vest........ U just a fan wit ma name tattooed on ya chest......... Im truly da best, u a pup tonite...... N wit a name like Butters u must be white.......... Dis nigga saw ma verse n he ran for help......... N u think u hot, but if i put in a pan u'll melt............ Seriously kid ya nutz, i'll leave ya throat cut......... Take away the e.r.s in ya name cuz nigga u butt.... I'll puncture y alungs just for fun homie ya done.... U claim u nice but elevate, cuz u jus joined dis month 1....... |
whoa e-fag/e-thug....you did that all by your self?....lmao..and you were accepted in a crew...please.
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Voted For: .Fatal Lyricist.
.Fatal Lyricist. - Good spit, you had good punches in there and personals.. it flowed well too. Best Line - Im truly da best, u a pup tonite...... N wit a name like Butters u must be white.......... Dis nigga saw ma verse n he ran for help......... N u think u hot, but if i put in a pan u'll melt............ Worst Line - I'll puncture y alungs just for fun homie ya done.... U claim u nice but elevate, cuz u jus joined dis month 1....... Butters - Iight spit, lacked a good flow, but there was some decent punches in there. Best Line - Fatal who? your not legendary, i mean pssh look at ya rec... Pushing paper huh?...dont mean you can handle & master the text... Worst Line - Picked on this noob, but you got the wrong end of the stick... You set this battle not knowing my skill, Cos ill literally step on ya clique... OVERALL - Good battle here, but I think FL took this one. He had the better punches and his flow was alot better. Butter, dont say shit bout wordplay cuz ya didnt have any. So work on that if you wanna say you got it, and work on your flow cuz it was all over the place. Vote -.Fatal Lyricist. Return The Fav http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=169298 |
that was a bullshit vote...just for the favour...dickhead. i mean his personals were fucking weak, his structure was fucked...punchs were wack and he had a racist line..if you say it isnt then why say "with a name like butters he must be white"<fucking racist. you dumb cunt...fatal, you are only on rv because of your gfx. hoe. all my fucking lines beat all his lines, fuck face.
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butters u da biggest hater possible son damn lmao.....i spit dat in like five mins fam, i did it in skool n dats ma weakest dropson, but i knew it was enuff to beat ya wack ass hahahah dont cry :spit:-1- n dats not a racist line...
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no look @ your record hoe...1-4? you just another herb thinking they nice....bitch.
im gonna win this anyway...so fuck you. |
Voted For: Butters
nice verse butters i really enjoyed reading it and you used some complexed vocabulary in your verse which was good... both ya'll lacked multies... BUTTERS... Fatal who? your not legendary, i mean pssh look at ya rec... Pushing paper huh?...dont mean you can handle & master the text... nice opener and good punch... 7/10 Check yaself brother..cos you bout to be dropped, & dismembered... Lopsided battle...ill leave fatal in the shade..more than his avys rendered... lol this punch was good a play off his avy 8/10 Picked on this noob, but you got the wrong end of the stick... You set this battle not knowing my skill, Cos ill literally step on ya clique... another good punch 7/10 I stand firm, throw ya punch's at me kid...cos they just get deflected... But fatal claimed he was ill....cos he got a lifetime prescription of anti-septics... ill(anticeptics) nice well thought of... 8/10 Ill put holes in your verse, leaving it looking like a site under construction... Many words can describe you, like "You suck", like Gary coleman & Liposuction... hahaha this had me rolling... likeng the gary coleman line... 9/10 overall i thought your verse was really good to read i didnt get bored of reading it... 8.2/10 FATAL... Listen lil nigga u cood catch 2 thru ya vest........ U just a fan wit ma name tattooed on ya chest......... weak opener... weak punch. 5/10 Im truly da best, u a pup tonite...... N wit a name like Butters u must be white.......... ^ whats wrong with being white??? 4/10 Dis nigga saw ma verse n he ran for help......... N u think u hot, but if i put in a pan u'll melt............ another weak punch... 4/10 Seriously kid ya nutz, i'll leave ya throat cut......... Take away the e.r.s in ya name cuz nigga u butt.... lol name play spsoe it will do...6/10 I'll puncture y alungs just for fun homie ya done.... U claim u nice but elevate, cuz u jus joined dis month 1....... weak closure... 4/10 ryt overall i thought your verse was too simple your lines were too short and you lacked some hard punches... 5.4/10 v/ butters.... return the favour no hate links in the sig. :thumbup: |
Voted For: Butters
.Fatal Lyricist. Listen lil nigga u cood catch 2 thru ya vest........ U just a fan wit ma name tattooed on ya chest......... ^weak opener Im truly da best, u a pup tonite...... N wit a name like Butters u must be white.......... ^no punch Dis nigga saw ma verse n he ran for help......... N u think u hot, but if i put in a pan u'll melt............ ^doesn't do trick Seriously kid ya nutz, i'll leave ya throat cut......... Take away the e.r.s in ya name cuz nigga u butt.... ^decent I'll puncture y alungs just for fun homie ya done.... U claim u nice but elevate, cuz u jus joined dis month 1....... ^nope... Weak verse, no real hardhitting punches or personals whatsoever. Vocab was basic, structure n flow were okay though. Keep on battling and read other battles cause you gotta improve your punches and such... .Zer0 Fatal who? your not legendary, i mean pssh look at ya rec... Pushing paper huh?...dont mean you can handle & master the text... ^decent opener Check yaself brother..cos you bout to be dropped, & dismembered... Lopsided battle...ill leave fatal in the shade..more than his avys rendered... ^okay Picked on this noob, but you got the wrong end of the stick... You set this battle not knowing my skill, Cos ill literally step on ya clique... ^not feelin it I stand firm, throw ya punch's at me kid...cos they just get deflected... But fatal claimed he was ill....cos he got a lifetime prescription of anti-septics... ^nice one Ill put holes in your verse, leaving it looking like a site under construction... Many words can describe you, like "You suck", like Gary coleman & Liposuction... ^good closer Mediocre drop, definately seen better from you but you got the win...Had more punches n personals in there, nothing extremly bold but better than the other cat for sure. Vocab, structure n flow were tight...Not your best verse but get the win anyways. |
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