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Class.Sic 02-21-05 11:38 AM

Chinese Food----------!
 
Chinese Food

Lol I was just eating some the other night and… I don’t know…haha just check it…

Just imagine, through all the noodle slurps and Kung Pao burps…
Those Dumpling squirts til your stomach stretches and hurts…
The Succulent taste of that Peking pork held in that plastic spork…
Chicken Fried Rice on that fork, Better than Steaks from New York…
That Sweet & Sour pork, leaving your shirts with nasty stains…
That’s not what’s on your brain, Orange Chicken coming in the main…
Next the Chow Mien, But don’t forget that soothing green tea…
Washing out those green peas, carrots and Chicken Teriyaki…
That kind by Mr.Miyagi, Found in China Town with Fried Calamari…
Has to be cooked, won’t eat that shit raw like Caviar Rolled-Sushi…
How bout that Rice Bowl for 3.49, With Soy Sauce that’s Divine…
Best Friend askin for some of mine, better go recycle for 35 dimes…
Some of that Spicy Chicken, that’ll leave you Finger Licken…
Second course is on its way & comin, get ready for pot-sticken…
With Asian waiters always serving, fresh fish from the reef…
C’mon this stuff will even make SPuL eat Broccoli and Beef…
Its like a plague on my Stomach, yet a Shakespeare in my mouth…
Like the Bible, this Stuffs heaven up top, but disastrous down South…

Dirty Nigga 02-21-05 11:43 AM

Washing out those green peas, carrots and Chicken Teriyaki…
That kind by Mr.Miyagi, Found in China Town with Fried Calamari…
^^^
LOL, Nice bar

Its like a plague on my Stomach, yet a Shakespeare in my mouth…
Like the Bible, this Stuffs heaven up top, but disastrous down South…
^^^
LMAO, The closer KILLED IT

This is by far the CRAZIEST Peice ta ever be dropped on RV, Its...DIFFRENT

A Whole verse on the wonders of chinese food, GOTTA LUV IT

Very creative sic, 10/10, AWARD FOR THE O.M OF THE MONTH GOES TOO CLASS.SIC, Nobody can fuck with this lol

Humour, creativity, multies, an ALL ABOUT CHINESE FOOD, I Love it hahaha!

YoungSoulja 02-21-05 11:45 AM

nice i love chinese food.i just never knew anyone
passionate enough to write a damn
verse on it but
wat you said was all fact

Class.Sic 02-21-05 11:47 AM

lol.........thanks for the feedback fam...uppin for more..

DQ 02-21-05 12:27 PM

Its like a plague on my Stomach, yet a Shakespeare in my mouth…
Like the Bible, this Stuffs heaven up top, but disastrous down South…
^Oh so true!

Loved the concept 'cause I'm practically addicted to Chinese food so nice to see someone write piece about it (was about time!). Vocab was hot, you used the right terms and everything...Was feeling your flow which was improved by multis you were using. Like the tempo of your piece, kept me focussed throughout the entire thing and now I'm in the mood for some Chinese thanks to you. Good creative thinking and nice to read for a change...

Delicious drop...(damn, I gotta get Chinese tonight!)

DQ

J. Luth 02-21-05 02:52 PM

nice shit dude. pc out

Class.Sic 02-21-05 02:54 PM

can i get somemore feed/critique plz....

J. Luth 02-21-05 03:05 PM

wasn't there a crew called Class sic, man?

Class.Sic 02-21-05 03:21 PM

way back when........

YuNG TiLT 02-21-05 03:47 PM

way back when...

but yea, u r stupid for this 1!!!
lmao...i am hella hungry now :laugh2:
good shit mayne, nice multis and wordplay and vocab
u half aziin bastard!...lmao...fuck im really am hungry :laugh2:

10-10 hands down

Quote:
Originally Posted by Buck.Shot
Very creative sic, 10/10, AWARD FOR THE O.M OF THE MONTH GOES TOO CLASS.SIC, Nobody can fuck with this lol


^^werdness

Class.Sic 02-21-05 07:29 PM

upppin............

Class.Sic 02-21-05 09:46 PM

uppin 4 feedback............................

Showstopper 02-21-05 10:28 PM

opps......................

Class.Sic 02-22-05 11:07 AM

uppin for feedback yo....maybe a nomination...:smile:

Ma$fit 02-22-05 12:13 PM

dis is dope as hell...now im hungry too...creative...like tha whole flow to everything...if there is an award for crazy OM's u won it...if there is an award for deep OM's i won it...*self glorification*...lmao through tha whole thang...peep my OM...click tha second link...its tha deepest piece on RV like dis is da craziest piece on RV...stay up fam...~1~


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