no talent is apparant
 

so we're on the rap reverse,
wot im about to write is worth less then the penny's in my mums purse.
aint our faults that she skint+my ryhmes r wack,
i think i fell before i started coz i aint black.
yeah im white,but live for hip hop!
but i can fight if you wonna have a pop?
im learning this game right now,i wonna hit it,
but im finding it so hard,with all the critics.
i need to read up on other's work i am told,
maybe that may help or give me an idea of a much needed mould.
wot cud be worse then being shit at the 1 thing u enjoy?
it makes me sick-nearly as much as a dad wrongly touching his own boy.
so i guess i should think im lucky really,im complaining bout this,
when youngsters problems are so bad,they end up wiv cut wrists.
dont tell me 2 get a new hobbie!
coz theres biger dreamers out ther,like those faggots:the english call bobbies!
so now have ur say is my flow better or worse then blow,
or is it alot more practice or jus leave it and go.................

I changed my mind. Instead of holding this piece up as it should be, (a whack piece of shit that disses itself and blames it on it's skin color)

I'll try to imagine that you're representing how you feel about your place in the open mic.

Bring me some links.