286 - On My Own
http://www.zshare.net/audio/58619922cd7f2c22/
leave feed this is only my first mix of it, im looking to improve |
okay..first off the beat.. is pretty ill.
vocals are pretty low..on the hook.. first verse comes in pretty goood..i like the content and flow. needs a little bit of more emotion...just a little more feeling into it. ahhh. the hook man. its got a good feel to it...but autotune wouldn't fit this beat.. and that last note is killing it... send me the beat and hook's words..let me see if i can help you a bit..me or my bud who can sing.. if you want.. otherwise..just needs a little more time into it and im sure it'll come out pretty sick.. you remind me of jin a little.. |
pretty dope song.
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