The_crazy_one vs. Young Duke
 

deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 bar min.
16 bar max.

aight ya'll i lost too many points by bein gone last week. time to start bustin heads

alight lets do dis dawg il drop later got stuff to do right now

damn to bad dirtboy had to put u up aginst me/
cause from the outher battles i seen you in i know that your shit will be weak
the biggest weak part of you is your pounches/
there so weak i dont think anyone one can feel them/
dog cause now im a hurt you so bad youll need to be put back in your crib/
now this fool actuly thought he was the Elites frount line assassin/
the only way he got there is by bitin of somebody elses battles/
when actually this fool is like B-Rad from malibu's most wanted/
tryin to rap but his flow is retared/
cause his mamma was a fuckin crack addict/
and now he's the jack ass so some one look at him/

You’re right about one thing, I don’t throw punches, I throw bows,
You would’ve had a better chance of winnin this battle if you no showed,
I’m like the Eagles defense, interceptin ya win like Brian Dawkins,
Quick witted, wit a larger vocab then Stephen Hawkins,
You could bite my lyrics for this battle, and there still would be no stopping this,
Cause the verse would be so hot for ya lungs, it’ll boil ya esophagus,
You aint crazy, but if you want me to show you crazy I will,
I’ll cut ya eyelids off and feed you nothing but sleepin pills,
I’ll throw more punches than Mike Tyson, guaranteed to leave you in fear,
You couldn’t win if you’ve been writin ya verse for over a year,
The only thing crazy gets you is a murderous verse that’ll nail you,
What you know about crazy, I’m one court case away from Bellevue…
~Yung Duke~

Aight Check Dis..

The_crazy_one: 4/10
Your Punches Were Weak, But Your Flow Was Decent. I Mean You Had Punches But You Just Need To Use Better Word Usuage and You Need To Get Sum Metaphors and Shit.

Young Duke: 6/10
Nice Spit, I Liked The Punches You Was Spitting, and The Flow On Dat Shit Was Mad Syck. Nice Drop Cuz, That's Why We Used To Be In Da Same Crew Cause You Sick. Props and Stay Up Mayn.

Vote - Young Duke

~R~

damn to bad dirtboy had to put u up aginst me/
cause from the outher battles i seen you in i know that your shit will be weak
wtf this doesnt rhyme and is fucking horrible
the biggest weak part of you is your pounches/
there so weak i dont think anyone one can feel them/
no
dog cause now im a hurt you so bad youll need to be put back in your crib/
now this fool actuly thought he was the Elites frount line assassin/
no
the only way he got there is by bitin of somebody elses battles/
when actually this fool is like B-Rad from malibu's most wanted/
almost decent
tryin to rap but his flow is retared/
cause his mamma was a fuckin crack addict/
doesnt rhyme. sucks hard.
and now he's the jack ass so some one look at him/
what the hell is this doing here? it sucks hard anyway

Well this was a waste of time. Try rhyming and not sucking ass next time, is all I can say.

Yung your verse was disappointing, but easily way better than this turdpile.

breakdown for crazy one:

flow:good job outside of the first couple of bars big improment over last week 6/10

volcab:alright still kidna basic but your getting better 5/10

punches: still not too many lines at yung duke best,"when actually this fool is like B-Rad from malibu's most wanted/" again though you are getting better 6/10

overall:17/30

breakdown for yung duke:

flow:good job nothing really wrong with it a couple of bars got a little streched but 7/10

volcab:nice job here some of the best in the league this week nice to see you showing up again you beat your oppenent here 8/10

punches:mainly talking bout yourself too much here not enough against crazy try harder at directing punches towards you oppenent more 5/10

overall:20/30

vote--yung duke

3-0 yung duke wins this