21. Mike Hawk Vs. 44. Ike
 

Rules:

Battles open Friday Night At 12:00 AM Eastern Time
Check-Ins Due By Sunday At 12:00 AM Eastern Time
Verse's Due By Tuesday At 12:00 AM Eastern Time
Voting Ends Thursday At 12:00 Am Eastern Time

10 Lines
No Biting
No Feeding
No Recycling
The Person With The Most Votes By The Deadline Wins

If You Break Any Of These Rules Including The Line Limit You Will Be Eliminated From The Tourney!

Good Luck!

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checkin in................................................ .

The thing is, you fucking ugly, ya bitches is years behind
Only reason you like the Knicks...is cuz u cant get wit dimes
Ike is a softy, I'll come on RV to slay this whore
It's not a gay marriage...when i say he jus cant engage in war
You scared of Mike Hawk, why wont you tell us
If i called u out, you would duck me so much, it'll make Donald jealous
Nasty bitch...dont nobody wanna visit ya house
Ever since you were born..thats when they been callin it the Dirty South
Ike, I got big guns....and you know what I mean
When I say, youll make it to the next round...........
....if you not dead after the first 16.

blah to the Max ppl

Even if HAWKS sight are in black 'n' white, he's "gonna see im nice"
might try to imitate jordan, but nobody "wanna be like mike"
may think you nice, but only to "yaself it might seem"
you say you tight, despite your record bein "twelve 'n' nineteen"
just comprehend you cant step, you "see my spits is crimes"
ripped up....hawk gets lit up like "trees at christmas time"
IKE is spittin gifted lines, that rip this "misfits mind"
and leave this chumps frame crooked like a "lipstick line"
I choose to elude this dude, this verse is a "lesson you might use"
you's a fool if you thought i'd lose to a "freshman in high school"






explanations:
1st bar: birds see in black and white.......the MJ commercial were everyone wants to be like mike...
2nd , 3rd , 4th bar: self explanatory
5th bar: he is 14 yrs old....has to be a freshman in high school

stfu and stop freepostin theres an edit button for a reason

damnit this stupid ass kid over here voted on here......please take the vote off.....sorry about the trouble.....he is a moron.....im sorry...please dont dq me

Done, you wont get DQ'ed for it but make sure it doesnt happen again - F.I

v/ mike hawk

he came with better punches........he was way more creative........he had some good witty lines and good wordplay.....

ike- you had some weak punches.......and failed attempts at personals........no real creative lines...........the christmas tree lines are played like woahh.......

basically mike hawks verse was just a level above ikes

v/mike hawk

The thing is, you fucking ugly, ya bitches is years behind
Only reason you like the Knicks...is cuz u cant get wit dimes

vs.

Nothing of Ike's

That is my breakdown..

..If you dont like it, eat shit and post better next time.

Vote - Mike Hawk

Mike Hawk :

The thing is, you fucking ugly, ya bitches is years behind
Only reason you like the Knicks...is cuz u cant get wit dimes
^^ good meta 8/10
Ike is a softy, I'll come on RV to slay this whore
It's not a gay marriage...when i say he jus cant engage in war
^^ehh decent 6/10
You scared of Mike Hawk, why wont you tell us
If i called u out, you would duck me so much, it'll make Donald jealous
^^funny as hell stretched tho 7/10
Nasty bitch...dont nobody wanna visit ya house
Ever since you were born..thats when they been callin it the Dirty South
^^good but streeeeetched 5/10
Ike, I got big guns....and you know what I mean
When I say, youll make it to the next round...........
....if you not dead after the first 16.
^^ uhh that was really streeeeeeetch and kinda weak decent meta 6/10

overall : 32/50 (64%)

Ike:


Even if HAWKS sight are in black 'n' white, he's "gonna see im nice"
might try to imitate jordan, but nobody "wanna be like mike"
^^first line wack second was dope good meta 7/10
may think you nice, but only to "yaself it might seem"
you say you tight, despite your record bein "twelve 'n' nineteen"
^^dope flow decent personal kinda played 7/10
just comprehend you cant step, you "see my spits is crimes"
ripped up....hawk gets lit up like "trees at christmas time"
^^dopest bar in this battle without question 9/10
IKE is spittin gifted lines, that rip this "misfits mind"
and leave this chumps frame crooked like a "lipstick line"
^^ehh decent 5/10
I choose to elude this dude, this verse is a "lesson you might use"
you's a fool if you thought i'd lose to a "freshman in high school"
^^ decent 5/10

overall : 33/50 (66%)

i really think ike won this... mike your lines were just too stretched and that made you lose points in my opinion... and i think ike's xmas tree line was pretty dope mike youll probably end up winning anyways but i say ike got it

my vote has to go to mike,.... good verse here....
ike.. please dont use them.. " ' "' ' thats just herby
um mike.... you came prety hard with your punches.... could have improved on your wordplay and structure but overall the verse was pretty nice
ike.... as i said... dont use " ' and shit to show were the punch is... thats basically saying that you think the reader is to dumb to understand you punch....
it was a bit basic... a few of your rhymes were forced.. overall i just liked mikes verse more...

My vote goes to mike hawk, the kniks line, and donald line, was pretty fucking funny, well done, ike came simple, mike dropped above his level, funny meta's dope punches, ike had some good lines, but came simple, my vote goes to mike

here is my breakdown, as always no hate...its just a battle...

first up is Mike...
The thing is, you fucking ugly, ya bitches is years behind
Only reason you like the Knicks...is cuz u cant get wit dimes
7 blah, decent opening punch...not your best...
Ike is a softy, I'll come on RV to slay this whore
It's not a gay marriage...when i say he jus cant engage in war
5 this was terribly worded, and therefore ruined an already sort of played subject
You scared of Mike Hawk, why wont you tell us
If i called u out, you would duck me so much, it'll make Donald jealous
6 i've read almost this same punch before, a few times
Nasty bitch...dont nobody wanna visit ya house
Ever since you were born..thats when they been callin it the Dirty South
6...isn't so coherent of a thought process...doesn't flow at all
Ike, I got big guns....and you know what I mean
When I say, youll make it to the next round...........
....if you not dead after the first 16.
5 wow, you are better then gun punches as your closer...stale mike, stale...you should have brought it back to the days of the lll, your style was sick...pretty just no wit in this battle..

Ike

Even if HAWKS sight are in black 'n' white, he's "gonna see im nice"
might try to imitate jordan, but nobody "wanna be like mike"
6 very played, although this was a different spin...you should work on only have one strong punch in a bar, rather then two sorta blah punches...
may think you nice, but only to "yaself it might seem"
you say you tight, despite your record bein "twelve 'n' nineteen"
7 this is so true, records don't matter, but it was worded so well, that the punch came off strong
just comprehend you cant step, you "see my spits is crimes"
ripped up....hawk gets lit up like "trees at christmas time"
7...its played also, but because its the season its a lil different, for playing off the atmosphere he gets marks
IKE is spittin gifted lines, that rip this "misfits mind"
and leave this chumps frame crooked like a "lipstick line"
7.5 this is a stupid 'hurt you' punch, but the wordplay is real nice, worded well...ike has some potential...
I choose to elude this dude, this verse is a "lesson you might use"
you's a fool if you thought i'd lose to a "freshman in high school"
6.5 this was sorta blah, you shoulda played off freshmen, more os....

Mike=30
Ike=34

vote Ike

Mike you are easily better then ike, although he has some wit, he just needs to learn how to make original punches...you just didn't spend enough thought on this verse...you came almost equally played, although with less wit...

no hate boys

ok the vote count is 4-2 right? one of the votes is an extra one thrown in there for mike that nobody voted on......so he should have 4....and i got a vote from jpoll and flow .......it should be 4-2.......and is there nothin we can do about unexplained votes in here? because really the only one who had a thorough vote for mike was new method.....maybe 4fil but he didnt really explain his too well either? shouldnt votes be explained better or does it not matter?