Yo What Up vs. makaveli-rest
 

10 lines

house rules

verses due tuesday night at 12 est

blind spits

CHECKIN IN.........

since i got a battle verse to key tonight, i hope u dont mind that i set the due date for tomorrow instead of tonight.........

but yea...ill key somethin tomorrow.......

yo you lose

chew before you swallow
if you do your mouth will be hollow
you finally got that dick out the middle
while you listining to my riddle
yo name says yo what up i know you sayin that to a man
you like please could you jackoff to me with your hand
im not tryin so im not takin my time
thats why im finishing dis so i cud give yo mama that dime
i got to do yo mama quick cuz she has an appontment with a mime
the only time you see cum your hands is realy near
thats means you jackoff with your finger in your rear
what im sayin is you a big queer
just leave forever and never come back
if you do i know youl have in your hands a big sack
just fuck you ill end this with my mack

Yo What Up~ get yo dtuff up by 30 minutes

are you there

its been an hour

aight yo.......check the rules son......

but ill key my shit up now........

you could make a other topic since i already got a vote from that guy

and i.c.u.'s vote will be removed.........but anywho........check it out........yo, yo.........

u started to cheer-for-awhile, thinkin u had some chance of winnin, but then u just ruin that by showin ya queer-style
u run a frontier-for-miles, tryin to escape, but its sad u gotta try and stop me from comin wit personals so u clear-ya-profile

i couldve just come wit my opener cause its all-id-need, dawg ur past trippin, ur just startin to fall-wit-speed
ur small-and-cant-read, if u read the rules i got over a day, but i guess now ill just make u brawl-and-bleed

fuck kid, u demanded-this-dual, but u wack, and when people ask you to spit, this bitch just hands-in-drool
man-ur-kool, what?, this ass wipe thinks hes loaded and packed wit skills, but this fag cant even understand-the-rules

everyones tryin to do their best and open doors to succeed, but honestly dawg, there just aint a lock-for-ur-key
im still out droppin-gs, do seriously think u have a chance, kid theres nothin out there u can do to stop-me

ur rhymes just dont seem-complex, and hows he supposed to come wit hard rhymes when he hasnt even seen-sex
and i agree wit u, let makaveli-rest, cause hes gone, and u betta start worryin bout urself, cause ur gonna be-next

EXPLANATIONS

1st bar - he has nothin in his profile

3rd bar - a couple posts up he told me to drop in 30 min.....rules say verses due tomorrow at 12 est

5th bar - makaveli-rest is his name

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lol........i got writers block like whoa........

ahh well.........still should be enough.......

and icus vote will be taken off of the poll once token handles all the shit in battle forum problems.......

UPPIN FOR VOTES!!!!!!!!!!

leave a link and ill return the favor.........

thats good but why did you make it so long it like 3 paragraphs

i mean 5 paragraphs

I think Makaveli won this battle right here his lines were more competent
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114755

^^^quite the dr vote, but.......

i got 10 lines hombre......

UPPIN # 1 !!!!!!!!!!!

uppin