Cho-Kahn Miwang Vs. Mc Wicked
 

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I know im a little past the time limit but My shit wont burn from my other computer so I need a little while to see wtf is goin on

Ok lots of problems

Topic>New Love

Tori Diane

this song was writtin when my daughter was born but I never got around to recording it till now. I wish I could of did more to the track but I was pressed for time this week.

The last verse and part of the second hook are cut off for some reason

^^^That link dont work

Tori Diane

Flow:5/10 kind of blah off in quite a few spots random blank spots
Delivery:3.5/10 omg the snging flat singing and pretty much monotonus flow
Creativity: 6/10 ill eb easy because i didnt hear most of what u said to be honest but the bits that i did hear wer pretty played
Lyrics: 5.5/10 nothing i havent heard
Beat:3/10this sounds liek ahorrible remake of a bone beat

Total:23/50