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Wordz Ahgod vs ~Luciano~
Battle Rules:
16 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 60 Check in by: 07-07-06 at 07:26 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. Expired battle win - closed |
Wordz Ahgod has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-04-06 08:05 PM.
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~Luciano~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-05-06 02:53 AM.
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Listen...
ill smack u wit my feet till u cant blink beat me?.u think wrong in this bout u gettin left assed out like a fat kid in a pink thong all ya drops are shitty..really i was wonderin like whats tha funk? I Told this Bum to "Put ya Handz up" & he Punched the Trunk ill hit u with abonable knee drops... until your fuckin wig pops u beatin me in spittin? u trippin like joggin beaches in flip flops fuck it your thru..16 lines? yu shoulda only went a round or 2 not just in rap..but even on the fuckin map im lookin down on u u smell like feecees u cant reach me cuz im outta ya reaches u'll never MAN up & beat me cuz lauderdale nuthin but beaches you aint a vet yet? i wanna kno...all your rhymes who wrote it? all your shots @ me never were seen like a goalie blindfolded here ill give u a tip bitch....get a .45 ski mask and then go rob all of your Wordz make no Cents..... like a worker with no Job u gotta grow up to get at me face it ya lackin maturity brotha ill Beat on this "EyeDendty" like jackin off on ya social security numba's **Put ya handz up...in his avy. **His old name was "EyeDendty" **hes from Lauderdale.. i only explained shit..cuz i knew he was *Nuff Said* |
lets go
aight, u aint never spit a good bar, but u wanna hand me a loss? thats like trying to beat a video game....while the shit's still on pause plus ur rap-style is basic, u actually think u rhyme? I'll throw a bag of quarters at ur head, just to change ur mind then after that, I'll leave ur body damaged cut ur head off just cuz I cant stand the body language cuz dawg, A.I just looks at u, and knows luciano is not heavy this aint nintendo, u cant blow the cartridge so get off The Games dick already befor u try to get at me, understand that I'll spit bars to reach u cuz fuckin ya bitch to classical music is the only way Id ever come peaceful in otherwords, we could fight for days, its no hassle, we dont like yo ways ur wak writz wouldn't be hot if we left it over night in the microwave so understand ur place, u "the bottom" like south miami but I'll expose u for wat u really are, even wit out pulling down ur panties :shocked: I understand u aint a real nigga yet, but I'll spit at ur ligaments u shouldve quit early like pregnant bitches smoking too many cigarettes |
Voted For: Wordz Ahgod
aight, u aint never spit a good bar, but u wanna hand me a loss? thats like trying to beat a video game....while the shit's still on pause aight plus ur rap-style is basic, u actually think u rhyme? I'll throw a bag of quarters at ur head, just to change ur mind played.... then after that, I'll leave ur body damaged cut ur head off just cuz I cant stand the body language nah weak... cuz dawg, A.I just looks at u, and knows luciano is not heavy this aint nintendo, u cant blow the cartridge so get off The Games dick already weak...... befor u try to get at me, understand that I'll spit bars to reach u cuz fuckin ya bitch to classical music is the only way Id ever come peaceful aight i feel that a bit... in otherwords, we could fight for days, its no hassle, we dont like yo ways ur wak writz wouldn't be hot if we left it over night in the microwave ha better... so understand ur place, u "the bottom" like south miami but I'll expose u for wat u really are, even wit out pulling down ur panties weak... I understand u aint a real nigga yet, but I'll spit at ur ligaments u shouldve quit early like pregnant bitches smoking too many cigarettes aight ending.... a few qouteables an a few hits... couple played lines to thou... Listen... ill smack u wit my feet till u cant blink beat me?.u think wrong in this bout u gettin left assed out like a fat kid in a pink thong played all ya drops are shitty..really i was wonderin like whats tha funk? I Told this Bum to "Put ya Handz up" & he Punched the Trunk weak... ill hit u with abonable knee drops... until your fuckin wig pops u beatin me in spittin? u trippin like joggin beaches in flip flops aight... fuck it your thru..16 lines? yu shoulda only went a round or 2 not just in rap..but even on the fuckin map im lookin down on u simple weak.. u smell like feecees u cant reach me cuz im outta ya reaches u'll never MAN up & beat me cuz lauderdale nuthin but beaches nah not a good diss nor punch you aint a vet yet? i wanna kno...all your rhymes who wrote it? all your shots @ me never were seen like a goalie blindfolded aight here ill give u a tip bitch....get a .45 ski mask and then go rob all of your Wordz make no Cents..... like a worker with no Job ok kinda played already u gotta grow up to get at me face it ya lackin maturity brotha ill Beat on this "EyeDendty" like jackin off on ya social security numba's ok ending... no real good hits at all besides the ending being ya best hit other then that ya verse was lacking alot... vote: eye's for having more qouteables Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
lmao @ this hateing ass ni99a wit a 9-8 rec
nice try Uppppin.................. |
wat ever..............,,,,,,,,,,
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This was feedback posted for ~Luciano~
pollz.............................................
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Voted For: Wordz Ahgod
Luciana-Came pretty good had some good punches throughout your verse personals were appealing and effective...no problem with ur structure flowed on through which made ur punches noticeable. favorite lines: "ill hit u with abonable knee drops... until your fuckin wig pops u beatin me in spittin? u trippin like joggin beaches in flip flops" overall:6/10 Wordz ah-god:Came pretty hard aswell, i liked your wordplay and comical punches had me laughin and ur shit was appealing...structure wudnt bad had nice flow to bring out ur punches..personals was iight no complaints... favorite lines: "so understand ur place, u "the bottom" like south miami but I'll expose u for wat u really are, even wit out pulling down ur panties " overall: 7/10 v/wordz ah-god rtf if i get into a battle. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Thanks for the vote and feed back..this been up for dayz and wether I win or Luc wins...I honestly jus wanna get this out the way.
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ay man, you want to return the favor on my battle verse rexless with an honest vote? thanks.
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This was feedback posted for ~Luciano~
LMAO this was a good battle funny as fuck,.. good luck
to both... stay up |
thanks dawg. lets uppin for some votes on the real man.
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This was feedback posted for Wordz Ahgod
I was bout to vote on this battle but NOK and AI got a battle goin on so it wouldnt look rii
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