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4fil 12-09-04 07:51 PM

31. Paramik Vs. 34. E-Dubz
 
Rules:

Battles open Friday Night At 12:00 AM Eastern Time
Check-Ins Due By Sunday At 12:00 AM Eastern Time
Verse's Due By Tuesday At 12:00 AM Eastern Time
Voting Ends Thursday At 12:00 Am Eastern Time

10 Lines
No Biting
No Feeding
No Recycling
The Person With The Most Votes By The Deadline Wins

If You Break Any Of These Rules Including The Line Limit You Will Be Eliminated From The Tourney!

Good Luck!

Abraxas 12-10-04 05:14 PM

hi........................

e-dubz 12-10-04 07:13 PM

check..this should b hott

FlowIntelligent. 12-10-04 10:32 PM

No more freeposting in this thread or you will both be kicked out of the tourney if you wanna freepost do it in the talk about anything thread - F.I

e-dubz 12-13-04 09:37 PM

shit i forgot bout dis...well heres somethin quik

i knew this nigga was a fag, i bet yo name Shelton or Shaun
you like eminem cleanin out his closet and findin elton john
paramik be 4real, its only a couple a heads on here dat can hang
this nigga..... uglier than a pair of Birdman Lugz on Luol Deng
comin at me wit less heat den the white chicks movie script
i’ll leave you in a pool of ‘blood’ like you dissed a newbie ‘crypt’
you wanna see fights, dubz a real vet....i got a match for ya
u so wack, you couldnt flip shit playin in toilets wit a spatula
he talkin like B Rabbit nigga u jus choke when u hit da stage
its ova, ima have paramik gone in 60 seconds like nicolas cage

Abraxas 12-14-04 09:32 AM

Damn... i misread the due date... i cant do it now cos im in school...
FUCK FUCK FUCK!!

FlowIntelligent. 12-14-04 02:06 PM

nah man you got till tonight at 12:00 AM or i should say 11:59 PM u still got time

Abraxas 12-14-04 10:18 PM

IIGHT THEN....


Another fucking C.S. kid?, now we all get sick and tired of them.
I got another one, you can be the giant, but I’ll be chopping the stem.
I admit that E-dubz is a good kid, and we all respect you, though…
You might not be in the naughty list….
…………………………………… but Santa’s still calling you a Ho!
Dub’z joining the party? I’ma have ya sonned, and its even text shown.
I’ll leave ya owned…
…………Cause I can defeat you with the lines I can hold in my phone.
Let me serve ya my specials, but I can’t hear what the fuck he just said.
Cuz I was supposed to give him salad, but asked for more beats instead. (Beets)
You spitting fire? I admit ya verse was hot,… that was after I boiled it.
Fulla shit, I’ll be destroying ya verse, like dropping bombs in the toilet.


it's actually ten lines... the ones that are inbettween the longer lines are just put there to give bettter flow......



i hadda do it kinda quik..

headgames 12-14-04 11:29 PM

E-Dubz:
i knew this nigga was a fag, i bet yo name Shelton or Shaun
you like eminem cleanin out his closet and findin elton john
lmao funny, but didn't hit
paramik be 4real, its only a couple a heads on here dat can hang
this nigga..... uglier than a pair of Birdman Lugz on Luol Deng
blah, wack meta
comin at me wit less heat den the white chicks movie script
i’ll leave you in a pool of ‘blood’ like you dissed a newbie ‘crypt’
ok not bad
you wanna see fights, dubz a real vet....i got a match for ya
u so wack, you couldnt flip shit playin in toilets wit a spatula
lmao great
he talkin like B Rabbit nigga u jus choke when u hit da stage
its ova, ima have paramik gone in 60 seconds like nicolas cage
lmao nice

Para:
Another fucking C.S. kid?, now we all get sick and tired of them.
I got another one, you can be the giant, but I’ll be chopping the stem.
lmao nice
I admit that E-dubz is a good kid, and we all respect you, though…
You might not be in the naughty list….
…………………………………… but Santa’s still calling you a Ho!
christams lines = played
Dub’z joining the party? I’ma have ya sonned, and its even text shown.
I’ll leave ya owned…
…………Cause I can defeat you with the lines I can hold in my phone.
ok not bad
Let me serve ya my specials, but I can’t hear what the fuck he just said.
Cuz I was supposed to give him salad, but asked for more beats instead. (Beets)
lol meh i guess
You spitting fire? I admit ya verse was hot,… that was after I boiled it.
Fulla shit, I’ll be destroying ya verse, like dropping bombs in the toilet.
lol ok

I think E-Dubz got this, both had some lines I wasn't feeling, but I think E-Dubz lines were more clever and funny, and hit harder

e-dubz 12-15-04 05:23 PM

uppin this for the votin council

e-dubz 12-15-04 07:24 PM

someone vote.. i thought dis tourny was spose to move fast

FlowIntelligent. 12-16-04 04:54 PM

e-dubz:

i knew this nigga was a fag, i bet yo name Shelton or Shaun
you like eminem cleanin out his closet and findin elton john
^^lmao dope 8/10
paramik be 4real, its only a couple a heads on here dat can hang
this nigga..... uglier than a pair of Birdman Lugz on Luol Deng
^^wack 3/10
comin at me wit less heat den the white chicks movie script
i’ll leave you in a pool of ‘blood’ like you dissed a newbie ‘crypt’
^^wack 4/10
you wanna see fights, dubz a real vet....i got a match for ya
u so wack, you couldnt flip shit playin in toilets wit a spatula
^^dopest meta of the tourney so far 10/10
he talkin like B Rabbit nigga u jus choke when u hit da stage
its ova, ima have paramik gone in 60 seconds like nicolas cage
^^dope closer 9/10

overall : 34/50 (68%)

paramik:

Another fucking C.S. kid?, now we all get sick and tired of them.
I got another one, you can be the giant, but I’ll be chopping the stem.
^^decent meta wack punch 5/10
I admit that E-dubz is a good kid, and we all respect you, though…
You might not be in the naughty list….
…………………………………… but Santa’s still calling you a Ho!
^^lmfao funny shit 8/10
Dub’z joining the party? I’ma have ya sonned, and its even text shown.
I’ll leave ya owned…
…………Cause I can defeat you with the lines I can hold in my phone.
^^decent meta decent punch 6/10
Let me serve ya my specials, but I can’t hear what the fuck he just said.
Cuz I was supposed to give him salad, but asked for more beats instead. (Beets)
^^another good meta decent punch 7/10
You spitting fire? I admit ya verse was hot,… that was after I boiled it.
Fulla shit, I’ll be destroying ya verse, like dropping bombs in the toilet
^^ ehh good meta good punch 7/10

overall : 33/50(66%)

vote: e-dubz

really close battle but that shit/spatula line just killed it

e-dubz 12-16-04 07:14 PM

more votes..come on votin council

Status 12-16-04 08:20 PM

ed ubz im sorry bout this but damn why you go and bite a lbascally a bar form eminem.....didnt mean to bust you out but im sorry i just cant take a biter...sorry...

EDUBZ IS A BITER

4fil 12-16-04 08:35 PM

I am closing this battle.... e-dubz wins 2 votes to 0 votes
e-dubz advances


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