Battling Tendecies
 

I bring these new bars, im the ghost writer so i brew stars
im black and i got you going wow like i used rob
come on the board and everything is likely
i pop-eyes cause when i spit in this game its hot and spicy
too explizit in the brain to calm my temper knife me
its like i play golf cause under my rocawear stays white t's
now everybody talking bout life b
but i'm here spitting out dirt blinding your eyes like light beams
and im 8 long, hard and brain getting like night dreams
and punches are useless against me like ya fight steam
might scream, when i come at ya like the enemies sighted
but its gonna take ten-ne-ssee(ten ta see) me like you challegened the titans
you'll think its dead(out) wrong the way i damage your write(ins)
but you like a dirty ass, your only future is getting wipeings
who you bitting, bitch i told ya im hard like steel
come at me but i only run with crews the size of wheels

uppin

Yo dat was pretty tight really the only thing wrong wit it was you didnt space your lines and some of them got a little hard to read as in i couldent tell what the rhymin words were and some vocab. here and there try to look at the alfebet .......but other than that on a scale of 1-10 ten bein jus straight up sick ide say proly bout a 6 1/2 witch isnt bad i have seen alot worse so just space your lines work on some vocab and you got the verse on grip!