i call u out
 

I DON'T EVER GET PERSONAL/CAUSE I'LL RIP ANYBOBY'S VERSE YOU KNOW/A FOOL WITH A TON OF GOLD LOOKS LIKE HE'S CURSED YOU KNOW/SOON PARTIN' LIKE MOSES SPLIT THE SEA/YOU'LL DROWN IN YA OWN RHYME SOLILLIQUEY

i didnt see the point to this one...
first of all, you gotta drop more than that son... secondly, learn to press enter.. like i did... you need to expand your vocab, work on your flow and drop about a subject other than
"i'll kill you in battle, bring it on etc etc"
anyways keep rhymin

WHAT'S UP WITH THE LIGHT WEIGHT CRAP?/HEAVY WEIGHT'S THA RAP/IF RAKIM SWALLOWED SEVEN, I SWALLOWED EIGHT AND CRAPPED/DO THA MATH--THAT'S 24 DEVOID THE BEATEN PATH/THA MIC'S MY BEATIN' STAFF/PATROL THA ROAD SELDOM TRAVELLED BY THE MULTITUDE, FREE AT LAST!/COMPLETE THE DAY WHEN I DEFEAT THA LAST/DEPLETE THA VAST VOCABULARY ON ANY ADVERSARY/ANY RAP I CARRY-- BEEN HAVIN' ATLAS WEARY/YOUR STYLE OF MC PRESENTS A (M)INOOT (C)HALLANGE AT BEST/BASE MY BALANCE OF DEPTH LIKE THE BENDS CHALLANGE
BREATH/UNDER PRESSURE I SQUEEZE A CHALLANGER'S CHEST/SO IN A YEAR I PASS EIGHTY-SEVEN-SIXTY CHALLANGER'S DEATHS....

much better... keep rhymin

TO INSPIRE/DOWNIN' MY FIRST POST WITH FIRE?/ARE YOU IN DIRE NEED OF ATTENTION FROM THIS FORKED TONGUE FOR HIRE?/YOU NEED A HIGHER RESOLUTION TO SEE WHAT I'M COMPUTIN'/SOO WET BEHIND THE EARS ANY FLOW YOU GOT IS JUS DOUCHIN'/IF YOU RHYME TO ME YOU'RE PROVIN'--IF WRITE ONLY YOU'RE LOSIN'.......

WHAT'S UP?

24 MC'S = ONE PER HOUR = ONE DAY
365 DAYS IN A YEAR = 8760 MC'S DEATHS

if you cant take criticism then dont post... you're not exactly the illest emcee to ever hold a mic... just cause you can only rap about how good you "skills" are... you cant spit shit on my posts... do i see you getting any props? no... no one bothers to reply cause your shits weak... dont post on my shit either... you just nothing but a punk wanna be emcee... DONT keep rhymin

WHAT'S UP WITH THE LIGHT WEIGHT CRAP?/HEAVY WEIGHT'S THA RAP/IF RAKIM SWALLOWED SEVEN, I SWALLOWED EIGHT AND CRAPPED/DO THA MATH--THAT'S 24 DEVOID THE BEATEN PATH/THA MIC'S MY BEATIN' STAFF/PATROL THA ROAD SELDOM TRAVELLED BY THE MULTITUDE, FREE AT LAST!/COMPLETE THE DAY WHEN I DEFEAT THA LAST/DEPLETE THA VAST VOCABULARY ON ANY ADVERSARY/ANY RAP I CARRY-- BEEN HAVIN' ATLAS WEARY/YOUR STYLE OF MC PRESENTS A (M)INOOT (C)HALLANGE AT BEST/BASE MY BALANCE OF DEPTH LIKE THE BENDS CHALLANGE
THA BREATH/UNDER PRESSURE I SQUEEZE A CHALLANGER'S CHEST/SO IN A YEAR I PASS EIGHTY-SEVEN-SIXTY CHALLANGER'S DEATHS....

haha, Oi, bluvd, that shit is so weak, take the criticism and fucken go from that, don't diss my boy inspire man, your poor fucken shit little verse is pathetic man, you got a lot of work to do, fucken take that advice and stop runnin your mouth. You aint gettin no respect up in here, my man was right, what the fuck was the point of that??? U gotta lotta learnin to do....

No...No...NOOOOOOOOOOO.........NOOOOOOOOOOO


Inspire, good job on trying to help this guy...But I don't think he wants it...I'm going to move it to the Wackness Emergency Center...

BOY DICK RIDING IS THE NORM IN HERE. MY VERSE IS TWO HIGH FOR ANYONE ON HIS KNEES TO TRAVERSE/HIT ME-BLOW THA BELT/WIP YA MOUTH AN' JUST CURSE

WACK WACK WACK.... YOU GOT MOVED HERE FOR A REASON... CHECK OUT OPEN MIC... YOU MIGHT FIND SOMETHING INTERESTING... LOL

wow bluvd your rhymes suck, admit it, why do you think this got moved into this room??

lol at first lines, improved a bit after that but it belongs here until you improve