Shadow(1-1) vs. Durmil (1-0)
 

deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wensday
verses due by thursday
votes due by the next sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd
bar limits:
4 line min.
12 line max.
REMEMBER in your check in thread you must edit it with 5 vote links, if not you will be subtracted a vote every time you are missing a link!!!!

check....

good luck durmil..bring some heat..pece

voted...
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136188
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...d.php?p=1429893
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129842

Fiyah!!!!!!
 

*~Sigh-Anora Shadow~*

Explinations:
*He focuses on topicals....basically hes just the king of makin stories
**He used a pink font in the last half of his verse...very girly and very gay (he admitted his gay sexuality by usin the pink font....)
***play on his crew name
****there's no longer Mo-Town the label is dead...just call it Detroit for fukes sakes....and his Mosaic sig is very blurred and terrible

All The Wordplay should be understood...if not ask or dont vote

Yo tight battle in this one. Both of yall had ill verses but my vote goes to durmil cuz his shit was more complexed. Shadow had nice punches but it was simple.

Punches: tie
Structure: tie
Metas: durmil
Multis: durmil
FLow: tie

Vote: Durmil

shadow didnt come that hard at all but at least he was dissin well. I mean he had 2 played punches.....

did u take exlax or is ur style naturally "just shit"?-
have vango jizz in ur mouth ..hell "teach u how 2 spit-

u wont get better so for you theres no light at the end of this tunnel-
i dont have to "cum-hard" ur my bitch just open up and guzzle-

the rest was basic & had no complexity in the punches at all but he was sorta consistent & making "cusses" i guess.

So vote shadow...u have a slight ego so let me break it down why u lost rather than complain after my punch & make claims that I dont ur punches. BTW DONT EXPLAIN UR PUNCHES..WE ARENT MONKEYS...if ur punches are good u wont need 2 explain them

This gon be over quick, and you might not wanna know this shit
But pardon my french when I say I just bonjour(boned your) bitch
ok original...never seen it before & that was pretty funny..ur best line.

Excuse me for being 'blunt'....but you could never 'roll with me'
Topicals! the shit you spit is like a 'building' all u ever got is 'stories'*
1st line is played...not hard...the 2nd line isnt eve a diss...u had wordplay but not a punch.....how is a diss 2 say he writers stories?

It's morality that half way through his verse he accepted his sexuality**
Now shadow makin daily trips to his doctor askin "check my nuts for abnormalities"
wack...seriously...not funny or complex.

Ya gettin beat up, left wit more 'problems' then 'Jay-Z under emotional distress'
Moe-say-ick? lol sounds like a way of exposing ur genitals to the same sex***
this was even worse. That 2nd line was awful. How the fuck does mosaic sound ANYTHING homosexual?

Ur shit i've read...couldn't swallow the compititon if u gave the mic head
Leavin ya vision blurred like ya sig...and bitch like you Mo-Town is dead****
erm...i gess the 2nd line was a personal.

You got the wackest style...and i aplogize for kickin ya when ya down
But Shadow quit now...cuz ya just got 'assed out' like a 'hospital gown'
PLAYED this 2nd line was funny when it was done like 2 years back.

so obvious vote Shadow.

Punches: durmil
Structure: shadow
Metas: durmil
Multis: durmil
FLow: Shadow..

vote durmil...that was a damn good battle to both...

Ok

Opener-
a no show is the only way youll keep your respect..
u cant do audio..and your terrible at textual dialect-

8.4/10

This gon be over quick, and you might not wanna know this shit
But pardon my french when I say I just bonjour(boned your) bitch

^^ Perfer 2 Your Opponent Not 2 His Bitch..7/10

Closer

please dont spit a verse ur rhymes truthffully just bore me-
ur not usless after all u can walk behind me
and hold my pants up for me-

hahahahah 8/10

You got the wackest style...and i aplogize for kickin ya when ya down
But Shadow quit now...cuz ya just got 'assed out' like a 'hospital gown'

Pretty Nice 8/10

But Winner Of The Verse Is Shadow

Apothesis....saying all he's got is stories is a punch?!?!? its sayin hes bullshit at batle's and he does topicals cuz all he's ever got is stories and not battle versus....are u fuckin stupid?

and if you dont like my second line w/e but u cant ignore a personal....

but ya w/e uppin for more votes

STructure: Both
Flow: tie
personals: Tie
punches: Shadow
enjoyed: Tie
vote: Shadow

Punches: durmil
Structure: shadow
Metas: durmil
Multis: durmil
FLow: Shadow
overall: durmil

Im nto explaining



Exactly

i think shadow took this battle, he harder punches, closer was tight n funny and had some o.k personals, D didnt come his best here wiv some played lines n some basic filler barz, flow was tight from both n structure was good but shadow had a stronger verse!!!

oh n don't explain ur verse....pz

v/shadow

uppin 5-3 my favor