My First Audio......."Love Song"
 

aight yall it's my first audio i did it really quick i need to fix it up a bit but tell me what yall think about it so far....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/tckmusic.htm

I rocked this beat madd long ago lol...anyways...

Really this is not that bad for a first audio ...ya quality is pretty nice...ya flow is aight..but it kind of sounds like your reading your lyrics of a piece of paper..ya dilvary is nice ...ya hook is blah...

Overall dude..this is pretty nice for a first audio..let alone a love song..

Just keep elevating and you will turn out nice...

-K0z Ghozt

give me feedback and ill critique

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98957

thanks fo tha fedd back man uppin.....................

listening....


dope beat..

flows sick, hooks ill, like the style,

it sounds like you are reading just put some more feeling itd be dope


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another drop from billy

Thanks alot man uppin for feedback

did it really quick??


Some advice, post something WORTH LISTENING TO, which means, take the time to do a decent (SP??) audio.

the voice over makes you sound like a robot

....same tone of voice makes it boring..

but if u say its your first then..blah

pz

Uppn. fo feedback yall

feelin ya style n ya voice, but the track is koo.... loved the beat... but overall its a pretty nice track... nice quality...

C'mon yall...........

Keep tha feedback commin....

I thought this was pretty nice....

ya flow was on for the most part.....I like these kinda songs.....

Nice track....

thanks ^^^^^ thats what i likr to hear

i liked it..... witty lines, pretty good flow.... keep postin
holla back

This is sum nice shit from u bro. Cant wait to release our collaboration and tha 3 songs me, you, and MBP gonna record. Holla back.