please leave feedback this took me 4 hours (all night)
 

nigga dont wanna mess, nigga u shit..
i eat u up like a mars bar or a twix
nigga aint me u gonn get berried
the chance of u beating me is like bush beating kerry
stop please, i got keys .. foshizzle
im a cool white kid but i aint no wizzle
i keep it gangsta niggas no i bust slugs
and im a thug.. so u kno wu never trust thugs
U want beef neverman.. foreverman ya shit
i dont give a fuck nigga suck my dick
nigga im a RUGRAT and i do it for fun
AND U COULD call me TOMMY cos those are my guns..

aight wot u think..

thanks guy im tryna elevate go easy

im a cool white kid but i aint no wizzle
i keep it gangsta niggas no i bust slugs

That single bar, explains why you should never have post this up.

and there is many more reasons.

Agreed^^

Yo man your topic is played. it is sort of a self glorifaction style. Try get on a topic that you love. that way you will come with some deeper shit. For a 4 hour drop this si weak man. no hate.
also get your own style . The fashizzle ish from snoop is played and dead.
Try using multi's.(check omb's multi tutorial) Also get more creative and imaginative.
no hate man, but you need to elevate. which is obviously why your here.
so keep dropping man.
pz

^^^werd and you shouldnt een say the n word, you stated your white

in the hood there's guns and strife, run for my life// my glock pull it but duck a hot bullet// the deal is I feel strong emotions but my dome potions// don't work well my brain stained with bad behavior, glad the savior// look out for me, because my text polluted and electrocuted with legal evil//

stop postin, its annoyin,....b4 i split ya lid
i mean you spit as bad as this 4 hour kid.......nuff said