Calamity Vs Apotheosis(Punchline Battle)
 

2 bars.. 10 minutes from this post, we drop.. House rules(includes no crew votes)
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Apoth couldnt flip ill,by turnin the word sick over with a spatula..
and battling people backwards only time his punches be attackin-us..(they backfire)
call in calvary,cause in this battle of wits,your straws drawn short..
his status=dork,"Johny Cockrin wont help you win battles in this court"..

aight..drop

uppin for some votes.. leave some links and me and apoth will hit em back :)

Ummmm calamity....Attackin-us and spatula dont rhyme...

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lol.. do you listen to eminem at all ?.. it does rhyme.. just a different way to rhyme stuff.. play around with that bar for a while, you'll hear it.. i wouldnt have dropped that bar if it didnt rhyme.. i see oyur not used to influcuations of the voice.. eminem does it all the time..

So u bite from eminem?
Or do u think your eminem?
or do u try to be eminem?

no.. im just pointing out one of the many many artists who use this method of rhyming.. but i must name some others, i will... was just tryna let you know, that pronouncin "Spatula" exactly how its supposed to be pronounced, it ownt rhyme.. oyu have to say *say it with me* Spatch-uhluh... now say attackin-us.. do you see it ? not tryna be a bad ass or nething.. im being dead serious.. alot of people, arent able to see that type of stuff.. i do that alot in other battles and stuff.. its ust what i do.. didnt mean ne dis respect or ne thing.. and i dont appreciate that last comment you just made, tryna make me seem like a biter/emulater.. many artist do this.. uppin for votes..

Apoth couldnt flip ill,by turnin the word sick over with a spatula..
and battling people backwards only time his punches be attackin-us..(they backfire)

wordplay was ight...rhyme is a lil off but it works...7.1/10

call in calvary,cause in this battle of wits,your straws drawn short..
his status=dork,"Johny Cockrin wont help you win battles in this court"..

1st and second line pretty decent..good concept...7.7/10

Overall....14.8/20

I got bones to pick w/ you, so ill rip out ya skeleton & break it,
Don't fake it. . . calamity isn't ur user name. . . . . . . . . . . . . .
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . Its aimed at ur sig rhyme & how we rate it.

dope ish....8.2/10
Kid wants me naked, coz we all know doods are ya goal,
& his sex is like ear piercings. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
. . . . . . . . .coz hoops are only found in holes……TROLL!
pretty tight....good wordplay (i love wordplay)...8/10

Overall...16.2/20

Overall Apothesis won this...his wordplay was better, ur first bar was dope i was feelin u more in this battle

can ya both plz drop HONEST votes on my battle versus star...good shit keep at it:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133764

what the fuk.....i was 1-0 on the poll where did Durms poll vote go?

^dont thiink he could poll.. he might have forgot to poll.. alot of peeps od that.. but uppin and leave a link..Durmil, im bout ot check out one of your battles to return the favor

calamity

Apoth couldnt flip ill,by turnin the word sick over with a spatula..
and battling people backwards only time his punches be attackin-us..(they backfire)
/\ Nice punch i liked

call in calvary,cause in this battle of wits,your straws drawn short..
his status=dork,"Johny Cockrin wont help you win battles in this court"..
/\ Again nice punch


Apotheosis

I got bones to pick w/ you, so ill rip out ya skeleton & break it,
Don’t fake it. . . calamity isn’t ur user name. . . . . . . . . . . . . .
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . Its aimed at ur sig rhyme & how we rate it.
/\ Na didnt feel this

Kid wants me naked, coz we all know doods are ya goal,
& his sex is like ear piercings. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
. . . . . . . . .coz hoops are only found in holes……TROLL!
/\ Nice punch made up for the 1st one

V/Calamity his punches were stronger

RTF on this link...http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132981

uppin on this battle.. leave a link

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