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®enagade vs Terumoto
Battle Rules:
10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 200 Posts+ (Vote) G-L.. Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 04-22-07 at 04:55 AM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
®enagade has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-22-07 04:28 AM.
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Terumoto has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-22-07 04:31 AM.
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blinkity blank spank... I don't really need to get into this
even my meaningless gibberish shits on ya writtens, bitch No effort on my part, don't feel like getting my fists dirty Whoever you are, I'll beat you hands down like six thirty You hit girly.. The truth is your rhymin' is shit, I'd retire 'n quit if I rhymed just a bit like the lines that you spit If you get a single vote, I'll know that you were offering sodomy And naturally, in that case, I expect an honest apology. Yes, I realize my work contains nothing of merit or worth, but I don't have to write a personalized verse for it to hurt. |
your punches wack! and your delivery takin you nowhere like a barge in dirt you wouldnt have electrafying a-bill-a-tees if you fuckin charged your shirts seriously! step back from attacks or get your neck cracked cause you text wack your transformation is about as hopeless as post op transexuals gettin their sex back think your competin with me? please bitch your bravato gettin old seriously kid! your just a minor problem to me like diomand mines without coal comin to me for beef? please! I hope you like your fuckin steak tuff and as far as greatness? you'll never c-era like bow-wow after the break up this shits done and over!! ............far as im concerned to me you literally and lyrically dead cuz we all know it must have been an optical illusion, ........................ that u were even on my level in the title of the thread!! |
Voted For: Terumoto
Turnumono: blinkity blank spank... I don't really need to get into this even my meaningless gibberish shits on ya writtens, bitch No effort on my part, don't feel like getting my fists dirty Whoever you are, I'll beat you hands down like six thirty vs Ren: comin to me for beef? please! I hope you like your fuckin steak tuff and as far as greatness? you'll never c-era like bow-wow after the break up OVERALL: This was a pretty decent battle, but I am givin' my vote to T. He had the better punches and his verse was more creative. RTF: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=241446 |
Voted For: Terumoto
Terumoto got this...rhymes hit harder nd kept my attention |
This was feedback posted for Terumoto
i aint voting.....only cuz of all the times i begged you asshole "vets" to come and vote in this section n you all acted like complete assholes to us......
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Nobody has ever begged me to vote around here. Gkillaz dropped a vote and I rtfed, like a normal person would.
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Voted For: ®enagade
your punches wack! and your delivery takin you nowhere like a barge in dirt you wouldnt have electrafying a-bill-a-tees if you fuckin charged your shirts decent word-play... seriously! step back from attacks or get your neck cracked cause you text wack your transformation is about as hopeless as post op transexuals gettin their sex back bad flow, decent diss... think your competin with me? please bitch your bravato gettin old seriously kid! your just a minor problem to me like diomand mines without coal decent... comin to me for beef? please! I hope you like your fuckin steak tuff and as far as greatness? you'll never c-era like bow-wow after the break up nah not feeling this... this shits done and over!! ............far as im concerned to me you literally and lyrically dead cuz we all know it must have been an optical illusion, ........................ that u were even on my level in the title of the thread!! ok ending... not a bad verse... blinkity blank spank... I don't really need to get into this even my meaningless gibberish shits on ya writtens, bitch WEAK start... No effort on my part, don't feel like getting my fists dirty Whoever you are, I'll beat you hands down like six thirty nice... You hit girly.. The truth is your rhymin' is shit, I'd retire 'n quit if I rhymed just a bit like the lines that you spit nah.. If you get a single vote, I'll know that you were offering sodomy And naturally, in that case, I expect an honest apology. just flowing... Yes, I realize my work contains nothing of merit or worth, but I don't have to write a personalized verse for it to hurt. weak ending... |
Voted For: Terumoto
renagade- your verse was just hard to read..your structure and shit made it so hard for it to flow and your punches just werent up to par man, i wasn't really feeling much of a strong verse except for that bow wow line...was pretty funny..overall 1/10 terumoto-your verse wasn't that strong either though it was funny how you made a mockery of your opponent and even though you used no personals you still made him look stupid and easily took the battle..you had better flow and your punches and wittiness won you this battle overall 5/10 v/terumoto |
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Voted For: Terumoto
V/ Terumoto. Even though he didn't have that many punches, he came simply better. His verse flowed better. If you compare the 2, his work seems like the work of a vet. Renegade just threw some punches together in a off-structured verse. Terumoto brought a "effortless" swag to the table, and he won in my eyes. 1. |
Voted For: Terumoto
he wins because he show great compitition on the site whild he was alive........RIP |
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