~my Thoughts As A Man~
 

I am.....

a man, a wandering minstrel, pondering questions/
honoring what trends?, i set standards that of a seraphim/
and ALLAH take care of him, my bretheren on the forefront/
for days,nights,weeks, months, and years ,death is a sequel, i wage no war on any people/
cause they are MY people, the same people with skin of brass and hair of lambs wool/
the same who mask the blood of their beliefs in pits that the sand pulled/
i dont understand, who has the right to wage genocide on humanity/
can it be, morally standard/, please, i wage war under this canopy/
that i call a body, it houses my life force/
i'm blind to the truth, or maybe my eyes sore/
or maybe theyr'e wrong, forget it ,cause theres no
god but Allah..and Allah is that true mercifull god/
but thye're losing children, it's bullshit, i sigh, sob/
war proves nothing, this is wierd, they want us to join da military and the marine corps/
and i dont mean more than the crack rock of truth that humanity feinds for/
a sacred city falls, and the angels bow their heads in pure astonishment/
and i'm not proud of this, the ignorance of money that has shrouded men/
or centuries, ameneties, men will breath, freinds will bleed/
women are siezed, deflowered and sentenced with seed/
while i sit and watch the media make fools out of my democracy/
and it proves absolutely squat to ME, this is all nonsense and hipocracy/
saddam sits in a hotter seat, and frankly it bothers me/
cause he's fighting for a truth HIS people see constantly/
my GOD is better than noone elses, i'm not omnipotent, i have no say so in judging others/
but what the fuck do we do when we take sons from loving mothers?/
when we take funds from poverty stricken brothers, with no food in their cupboards/
do we tell them that also our american president is right and to deal with it and suffer?/
i'm a muslim man, and so is that man, even in pakistan/
i'm out of breath in this race for survival, even though the last lap is ran/
so what happens when, we wipe out innocents, cause we are, in a sense/
and jihad is emminent, all because of our ignorance/
the towers fell for a reason, dont seaize its treasonous hipocracy/
cause if you love this spot like me, you'll give props to GOD up top, with ease/
i'm no angel, i have my faults, granted i'm no demon either/
but these heathens seem to breed lust, treat cuts, and seam the sleepers/
i'm but one man, my words will go on deaf ears, even so, i've given my two cents, for the world to use them/
but let it be known that i AM MY BROTHERS KEEPER, when he reaches, i wont refuse him...........


yo............dont give a fuck wut ya'll feedbacks ar am just puttin my thoughts on paper.........

UPPUN Sleeeeeeeeeeeeeperssssssss

great vocab and what not
but the jewel of this piece is the flow
my fav examples are:

"or maybe theyr'e wrong, forget it ,cause theres no
god but Allah..and Allah is that true mercifull god/"

and

"so what happens when, we wipe out innocents, cause we are, in a sense/
and jihad is emminent, all because of our ignorance/ "

both of those are two of the best flows Ive heard
great drop man
way to keep shit opinionated

I really liked tha flow and rhymes you spit.

"cause they are MY people, the same people with skin of brass and hair of lambs wool/
the same who mask the blood of their beliefs in pits that the sand pulled/"
I erally liked these lines. great metaphors and rhyme scheme.

keep spittin

Fosho fosho......thnx Hooligan....Uppun

yo, nice deep shit as usual ruth.. there were some nice multies lacin' this track. word paly was up to your normal standard, you got mad tallent... yo, PM me too, I gotta talk to you about a crew thing..

Aight Blunt.......ama HOLLA

yo this was hella tight. very nice drop. excellent vocab, nice wordplay and metas and the topic was just great. good shit

THNX yo...i apreciate...tha feedback.....REP ~War Lords~ to tha fullest..........

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damn very well writtin. sweet fuckin play oin words throughout the whole thing. thx for the feeback on the poem dawg

ILL.....fosho thnx i apreciate it............^^^^^^^

honoring what trends?, i set standards that of a seraphim/
and ALLAH take care of him, my bretheren on the forefront/

that was ILL yo...

feelin this piece from head to toe...

hit me up for a collabo dawg..

stay up..

peace
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Thnx dawg..........just got to represent feel me.....and yea u wanted to get it at WAR LORDS.....go to try outs...and drop a verse ama holla bac

Ill, Deep, Tight An some great wordplay Keep it goin

an keep it gangsta!