Defined vs GêÑ触§
 

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No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-01-05 at 06:18 PM

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GêÑ触§ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-05 05:49 PM.

Defined has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-05 05:52 PM.

Your just a bitch, there isnt a doubt
ur like a candle, ima blow u out,
Kamze, thats a really fucking, gay name
this be Genesis, stepping up to aim
your gonna be the first man of many ima put to rest
Ima be the winner of this battle,
ur about to lose 100lbs, and thats just through sweat.

Sorry bout that that one was for me vs Kamze heres the real one

Your just a bitch, there isnt a doubt
ur like a candle, ima blow u out,
Defined, thats a really fucking, gay name
this be Genesis, stepping up to aim
your gonna be the first man of many ima put to rest
Ima be the winner of this battle, ur about to lose 100lbs, and thats just through sweat

And BTW I didn't use it vs Kamze yet so I'll have to make new one for me vs him G/L Defined

consuming ur mind so theres no room for 'blooming'
........ur looming to my callout is the end cuz ima 'doom-king'
ready yet u best grab on and be steady for da lyrical minety 'Genesis'
.........end ur career that never existed like Biz marke 'bigenning dis'
recheck so u have more time to reset ur 'punches'
.........dislect how i leave ya like a fat man doin 'crunches'
fast is to dash like i lyrically ran ur stash and u 'over'
.........couldnt beat me wit the luck from a '50 leaf clover'

some quick shit cuz i gots to bounce

Voted For: Defined

it waz really close but im gonna have 2 give dis 2 DEFINED cuz he had betta multies and a sick punchline

Voted For: Defined

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Weak batte!

Flow-Defined...had some mults at beggining but nothing really special to say the least.That other dude had a basic rhyme shceme.

Punches-Genisis....do you know what a punch is?It's looks to me you don't.It's all about wordplay and metas.Go check the tutorials.

Personals-Sadly...neither of you had any.Generic disses by both

Multis-Defined...cause like i said before..the other dude had none.He had a basic rhyme sheme.

Originality-Defined.....

"ur like a candle,ima blow you out"
^^NO!!
I see your problem...you just stating stuff....ya gotta be indirect.Check tutorials and find out how to use wordplay and personals.

Vote-Defined(vote in link above)

This was feedback posted for Defined
 

KO

easy as......................................

aight upin dis battle for votes............................

Voted For: Defined

ok Gen u didnt punch at all man that was really bad dude I couldnt believe u posted that wack for reals..sorry but u clearly lost here man. V/Defined for better punches and flow

aight uppin for some votes lets get dis closed....

Voted For: Defined

u got him in all area's punch's multi's word play u got my vote dude

aight last up lets get this last vote for the ko lets go