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7. Lay-Text Vs. 58. E.C
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Check-N This Muphucka ~R~ |
checkin in... good job i looked in here coz i didnt realise i was in this league
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I lay text easy... like i laid your mother with laytex rubber,
only reason is... she didn't want u having another little brother, king of rv? mostly topicals... how can you ramble the verbs, coz over 50% of the people you beat, seemed to have been herbs, rappin's like fat club its "survival of the fittest" ill give insisions, for you to lose weight coz you lost 5-3 to deadly vision, i feel "restricted" to tell you bout im unde"rrated" to lose no wonder his dick is crooked , coz this kid gets abused, you aint "The Greatest Gift" but whats with the big chase, coz this faggot couldn't catch me, if i was running in last place, **Explanations** (i have to explain or else u wudnr get shit) The shit in brackets are either topical battles that he lost and the name in there like big chase n deadly vision r hu he lost to, and obviously ya'll no his other names... click the link for the crooked dick line.. hoep u like :thumbup: |
Look I Could Say You Have Skill..but Then Rated Would Just Be Lieing.. My Punches Will Have You Going To Abuse Therapy Like Pat'O Brian.. I Was Searching For Punches and Couldn't Find One..That's The Mystery.. Problem Is..This Is A Battle..Not A Transcript Of R-Rateds Life History.. This Battles Mismatched..Check The Predictions Yo Man Check The Ratings.. Then Realize R-Rated Always Comes Before Explicit Content Statings.. Your Destruction Was Gifted..Right When Flow Matched Us Up Through Picks.. Because You Winning This Battle Don't Make Sense..Like Homos Without Dicks.. Like Paraplegics...Dog Theres No Possible Way You Can Stand My Weight.. Now Watch You Lose This Battle Quicker Than The U.S.'s Abortion Rate.. ~R~ |
E.C:
.I lay text easy... like i laid your mother with laytex rubber, only reason is... she didn't want u having another little brother, wtf was this, wack...... king of rv? mostly topicals... how can you ramble the verbs, coz over 50% of the people you beat, seemed to have been herbs, ummm this one is even wacker....rappin's like fat club its "survival of the fittest" ill give insisions, for you to lose weight coz you lost 5-3 to deadly vision, WTF? i feel "restricted" to tell you bout im unde"rrated" to lose no wonder his dick is crooked , coz this kid gets abused, wack.....should look at his other battles to get an idea on how they flipped it you aint "The Greatest Gift" but whats with the big chase, coz this faggot couldn't catch me, if i was running in last place, Wack nothing to say you need to elevate ALOT, this verse was wack as hell no bar was even ok.,.....and dont explain punches thats wack 3.0/10 Lay-Text: Look I Could Say You Have Skill..but Then Rated Would Just Be Lieing.. My Punches Will Have You Going To Abuse Therapy Like Pat'O Brian.. not feeling it fam...... I Was Searching For Punches and Couldn't Find One..That's The Mystery.. Problem Is..This Is A Battle..Not A Transcript Of R-Rateds Life History.. ight This Battles Mismatched..Check The Predictions Yo Man Check The Ratings.. Then Realize R-Rated Always Comes Before Explicit Content Statings.. like the way you flipped this, pretty good Your Destruction Was Gifted..Right When Flow Matched Us Up Through Picks.. Because You Winning This Battle Don't Make Sense..Like Homos Without Dicks.. lol........ Like Paraplegics...Dog Theres No Possible Way You Can Stand My Weight.. Now Watch You Lose This Battle Quicker Than The U.S.'s Abortion Rate.. ight... you had a better verse, seemed like you didnt try much, had some punchlines in there that made me laugh...overall you had a better verse, nice vocab too next time try though hoe... 6.5/10 Vote: Lay-Text |
E.C:
I lay text easy... like i laid your mother with laytex rubber, only reason is... she didn't want u having another little brother, set up was good, bar closer was played to the fullest king of rv? mostly topicals... how can you ramble the verbs, coz over 50% of the people you beat, seemed to have been herbs, you switched it up, closer was good rappin's like fat club its "survival of the fittest" ill give insisions, for you to lose weight coz you lost 5-3 to deadly vision, aight, ill go for this one i feel "restricted" to tell you bout im unde"rrated" to lose no wonder his dick is crooked , coz this kid gets abused, wasnt feeling it you aint "The Greatest Gift" but whats with the big chase, coz this faggot couldn't catch me, if i was running in last place, haha, best line worded. *verse was decent, wasnt completely a waste which is good, you had a few killers in there, the flow was good which counts. and ya had some original shit, so good verse...overrall it was decent Lay Text: Look I Could Say You Have Skill..but Then Rated Would Just Be Lieing.. My Punches Will Have You Going To Abuse Therapy Like Pat'O Brian.. good opener, kinda sets the tone of the verse I Was Searching For Punches and Couldn't Find One..That's The Mystery.. Problem Is..This Is A Battle..Not A Transcript Of R-Rateds Life History.. haha, aight good good, not diss HIM This Battles Mismatched..Check The Predictions Yo Man Check The Ratings.. Then Realize R-Rated Always Comes Before Explicit Content Statings.. ok. Your Destruction Was Gifted..Right When Flow Matched Us Up Through Picks.. Because You Winning This Battle Don't Make Sense..Like Homos Without Dicks.. good one, not funny, but good. Like Paraplegics...Dog Theres No Possible Way You Can Stand My Weight.. Now Watch You Lose This Battle Quicker Than The U.S.'s Abortion Rate.. haha, aight winner. *better flow, better punches, personals eh... you had the whole verse on ya side... you would have received all 8's across the board. good openers good bar closers, al of it... good. your gonna do well in this tourney. vote: Lay Text (even thought you called me the freepost whore) good battle yall, and good luck. |
Upping This Motherfucker :-D ~R~ |
E.C:
I lay text easy... like i laid your mother with laytex rubber, only reason is... she didn't want u having another little brother, ^^ehh 3/10 king of rv? mostly topicals... how can you ramble the verbs, coz over 50% of the people you beat, seemed to have been herbs, ^^no 2/10 rappin's like fat club its "survival of the fittest" ill give insisions, for you to lose weight coz you lost 5-3 to deadly vision, ^^ehh 3/10 i feel "restricted" to tell you bout im unde"rrated" to lose no wonder his dick is crooked , coz this kid gets abused, ^^decent 5/10 you aint "The Greatest Gift" but whats with the big chase, coz this faggot couldn't catch me, if i was running in last place, ^^good bar 6/10 Overall: 19/50 (38%) Lay-Text: Look I Could Say You Have Skill..but Then Rated Would Just Be Lieing.. My Punches Will Have You Going To Abuse Therapy Like Pat'O Brian.. ^^good meta 6/10 I Was Searching For Punches and Couldn't Find One..That's The Mystery.. Problem Is..This Is A Battle..Not A Transcript Of R-Rateds Life History.. ^^ehh 3/10 This Battles Mismatched..Check The Predictions Yo Man Check The Ratings.. Then Realize R-Rated Always Comes Before Explicit Content Statings.. ^^good bar 6/10 Your Destruction Was Gifted..Right When Flow Matched Us Up Through Picks.. Because You Winning This Battle Don't Make Sense..Like Homos Without Dicks.. ^^wack 2/10 Like Paraplegics...Dog Theres No Possible Way You Can Stand My Weight.. Now Watch You Lose This Battle Quicker Than The U.S.'s Abortion Rate.. ^^ paraplegic lines are played ok closer 4/10 Overall: 21/50 (42%) Vote: Lay-Text Battle Closed Lay-Text Wins 3-0 |
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