youngd vs sHoTTaBoY
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-28-04 at 07:45 AM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-25-04 08:15 AM.

I Got Rhymes To WASTE/
I'm Bout To 'FLIP' On This Young'n n Leave Scars On His FACE/
Have 6 Haitians Run In Ya House n Take Everythin Ya Own Leavin No TRACE/
This Aint The Olympics But I'm Blowin This Lil Fuck Off The Track Like A 100m RACE/


I'ma Take It To ThE 'Wild West' Days n Pop A Hand-Gun n Leave This cowboy DANCIN/
I'm Built Like a 'ROCK' n kats declare me the 'PEOPLES CHAMPION'

I Love actin a fool/
this a brand new day @ school/
i got a brand new tool/
its effects will have u helpless n drowin in ya own Blood-Pool/
u bout to get merked like everybody else theres no exceptions to this RULE/
muh'fucka u can find me CHILLIN in 'Iceland' Cause Bitch, I AM TOO COOL!


('FLIP' On This Young'n n Leave Scars On His FACE....Flip From ABOVE DA RIM An PAC Cut His Face With A Razor)

youngd has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-25-04 09:27 AM.

metaphorically symbolicly flowalogicaly ive ripped this battle.....
grab ya dummy rub ya tummy change ya bummy an pick up ya rattle.....
any way enough of tha bullshit that was just a consulation prize.....
the shows about to blow folks no more mr wise.....
me ya sis ya mom and ya bicth in a foursome to true....
you elton jhon and mr norton equals awesome to you.....

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Aiyyo People...WE DONT Drop Verses 4 The Hell Of It, People Start Votin Cause Its Juss Disrespectful To Leave A Battle Hangin Like That

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

ShottaBoy gets my vote

youngd- Started off nice with the multi's, vocab was nice in the 1st bar too an the punch was pretty good. It just fell off after that line. If the whole battle was consistant with that bar then you probably woul have got my vote. Nice though

ShottaBoy- Nice verse, layed out well and sum nice punches. Flow was good but vocab maybe cud use a bit of work, nice verse thgough

Shottaboy gets it coz of his consitant level of rhyming and slightly better punches

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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

Shottaboy got this
He had better wordplay, structure, n punches.
Youngd verse was more like a nursery rhyme. Not aggresive enough for me.

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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

I'ma Take It To ThE 'Wild West' Days n Pop A Hand-Gun n Leave This cowboy DANCIN/
I'm Built Like a 'ROCK' n kats declare me the 'PEOPLES CHAMPION'

dis line wuz a good pl i feel sHoTTaBoY took dis one it wuz longer den his oppent's da olympics line i saw b4 but u had more lyrcial content den youngd

youngd ur structure wuz good u had sum aite pl's but u jus didnt get any personals to me but if u wud of wrote more u cud hav hit sum better lines

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

give it 2 sHoTTa BoY his flow
was tight he had a few metas
to make his better n he had sum real
dissing youngd wut da hell were u talking bout
u definately had da vocab but ya flow made no
sense so u didn't get my vote
but give a honest vote on da battles in my sig

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

YO YO NICE BATTLE BUT

SHOTTABOY TOOK DIS ALL THE WAY

PUNCHES
MULTI'Z
WORDPLAYS (OLYMPICS LINE VERY CREATIVE)\

YOUNGD

URS WAS AIGHT BUT U NEED TO WORK HARD ON

PUNCHES

WORDPLAYS

FLOW

AND PERSONAL WORK ON THAT DEN U'LL GET BETTA

YO SHOTTABOY

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