Talon vs BROOKLYN
 

aight rules:
10 lines max
only mods can vote
no d/r, hate, crew votes
no feedin
ill go first
no recyclyin

My SLEEK PRESEANCE get your TEETH PRESSED IN, BROOKLYN been killed so many times this kid BLEEDS BLESSINS Get split in two with the third letter and become a victim of a C SECTION
I'm MOST DEBATED as a VULGAR SADIST made during one of Gods FLOWS OF HATRED My SULFUR TAINTED lungs can breath deep and FOLD THE PAVEMENT
I hold the power to CONTROL THE NATIONS using my mind as the tool to MOLD THE DON JUAN PHILLY NATION
URBAN CHILD has never known victory i've kicked his face in to prove he only KNOWS DA FEET My BLOWS TECHNIQUE be like lava cause i FLOW WITH HEAT he just a BITCH so its SHIN that i'm SUPPOSED TO EAT
If you BURN RAILROAD CONSTRUCTION you couldnt HEAT ATRACK So I'll eat you from behind to give you some FEED BACK

come on dawg i know it aint that hard to send a prewritten verse come on hurry up and send ur shit.....

^^ whose urban child?

HES FROM BROOKLYN RIGHT SO HE IS AN URBAN CHILD............................................. .................................................. ................................DURRRRRRRRRR

holy shit brooklyns battlin a fuckin newbie????? he must be good hey?not.....he has the best record all thanx to nebwie...lmao at brooklyn

^
rApId_LyRiCs??? REGISTERED IN AUG..... NO ONE WORTH QUOTIN IN SIG...GOT A VETERAN TITLE BECAUSE OF NUMBER OF POST
DAMN I'D BE ASHAMED TO TALK MR. WHO I MERKED RECORD KEEPER
I'LL BE DROPPIN SOON

HEY PUNK ASS BITCH I CAN FUCKING MERK U WANNA BATTLE FO PINK SLIPS THAT IS HOW CONFIDENT I AM OF BEATING U U FUCKIN PUSSY

SRY TO FREEPOST BUT BROOKLYN WHO MADE UR SIG I THINK THAT SHIT IS ILL AS FUCK HOLLA BACK AND RAPID LYRICS UR A PUNK ASS BITCH SO STFU

yo soon as dis battle done i'ma vote. but talon, i think yo ass bout to get merked............................................ .......................................

Brooklyn's Presence Is Primal, With The Bloody Instinct Havin Ya Dreadin Survival
I'm Embedded In Zygotes, Mom's Gave Birth To Corpses Cus Talon's Dead On Arrival
I'll Crack Ya Eye Lens With A Rifle, Shreddin Ya Weak Back, Creased Half'd
My Steez Wack? I'll Write Rhymes On Kodak Films & Still Won't Get Negative Feedback!
Breath Fast, Cus This Sick Individual Will Make Ya Stomach Turn As Rotated Bulemics
I'll Gloat With The Meanness...Flow To Demean Kids, While Dome's Molding In Sequence
Brooklyn's Holding The Secret, And You Better Off Deceased, Sandwiched To Wedge Maggots
I'll Fist Ya Moms During Her Menstrual Cycle Til Ya Literally Catch Me Red Handed!
Talon Might Impress Faggots, But I'm The Reason Why Cats Are Just Scared To Drop
I Was Conceived On 2 Fisherman's Wharf The Way My Whole Life's A Pier Of Docks
.................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...........

Talon, Wtf FIX YOUR LINE STRUCTURE.
Punches.. Brook
Personals.. Neither Were Good
Metas/Multis... Brook
Flow... Brook
Overall... Brook

Punches=Brook
Flow=Both
Enjoyable=Brook
Multies=Talon
Complexity=Talon
Vocab=Both
Metas and Similes=Brooklyn

This was Pretty close but I give it to Brooklyn

Hit line about "Menstral Cycles" Ill

Yo brook hit one my battle up dawg

tied cats include - multi's & closer
talon - slightly got flow
all other categories - brook

so vote = brook

Why You Gotta Pick On Lil Kids Brook ? Man You 68-6
You Dont NEed To Battle kats Like This
You Won Wit The Punches Neway

Vote - Brook