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Made you look like crooks with bags of jewels
like ludacris my rhymes leave you shook, actin a fool my rhymes have rules i don't accept wackness have skills to avoid your sorry ass on my blacklist since way back when i've been droppin-bombs lyrically attractive i have itchin-palms so the big pay day as they say should not-be-long jus the same-old-song, that might one day get radio play, have a rap classic like dre day keep your distance, cus i'm blessed, with a sickness keep ya hands off me cus you'll be, blistered in an instant from my scripture, collide and wished that you'd missed it skipped it, you left flat on your back is what i intended sorry-for-my ac-tions that will leave sores-on-your-eyes you're-in-surprise you back-flip and hit the floor-in-demise hide-your-eyes you don't wanna be watching my-fights try-to-rise from ya coffin if you step when it's fight-night shining-like-lights-bright you're denying i'm hot timing-like-short-nights laying by death you'll rot if lessons work then i'll teach you'll be taugh i'm new around here but can-ya-tell? i'll fuck you up worse then the power of 'isabel'// |
tight drop needed a lil something but was ill peep my new peace
will you ever understand........ this was good your style is agressive i think if you elivate a lil you would be twice as nice |
thanx for checkin this man, i'll go peep yours...
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i think the lack of a topic killed it for me
the vocab was there, mulits were lacking... flow was so-so... im not saying its that bad, just i felt you could have dropped much better nothing stood out of it that made me take a 2nd look... if you would be so kind... or hell give me hate feedback... i just want feedback http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81183 |
haha it's all good man, some feel it some don't, no worries, i'll return the favor...i'm jus trying to get better. Thanx for the feedback.
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no no no.
i stopped reading after you mentioned ludacris. bro. write something that actually means something. no more of this bling blang bullshit. it's shitty. |
whoa this guy hated it so much he had to go offline..
i welcome any and every type of feedback ya'll toss at me, can only make me better, next time i'll try hittin up a topic...thanx ya'll. |
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