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DirtBoy69 06-20-04 09:13 PM

**tournament match** l.i. vs. mixxed mc
 
deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm eastern
check in by wedsday
verses due by thrusday
votes due by the next sunday around 9:00pm eastern
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting that's what the beef thread is for if you do it here more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
bar limits:
4 line min.
16 line max.

L.I. 06-20-04 09:55 PM

gangstafied check in....yep yep....

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 06-20-04 10:21 PM

iight iight Checkin in iight 1

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 06-23-04 02:42 AM

Yo im Infected wit Rap Skillz Thats what i Provide...
Ya Sig Sayin Gods Well for u to win you need Him on ya Side....
If some one says ur a vet well they Lied....
when i came out ya hide,ran like a bitch to ya basement inside....
Weel 3-2 coming in atleast a Couple of wins....
Leave u DisFunctional and Froze like da Sims....
Well i Chould Tell why ya messed up goin 2 school wit Re-tarts....
The Only Way u get high on The Record is if u put weed on Charts....
Yo nigga im usein 10 lines u probley usin them all....
Spit Flowz n ma Punches so hard Leavein this FAke Fall....

L.I 06-24-04 09:12 PM

Kid's hooked on Buck cuz he wont ever make a dollar...
At least not for rapping, until he gives tutorials a holler...
What the fuck was that verse, kid ya rushed it...
It was pure shit, thats why voters will flush it...
Fuck you kid, thats a better punch than you have used...
I could post ur verse and use it as a punch against you...
Not a need to try when i already merked this guy...
Didnt try either time, put it simply for him, BYE...
Your out of the tourny, quit the league, elevate son...
Keystyled ya, merked him easily all for a little fun...

JPoll 06-25-04 02:26 AM

here is my honest breakdown...

first up is mixxed...

Yo im Infected wit Rap Skillz Thats what i Provide...
Ya Sig Sayin Gods Well for u to win you need Him on ya Side....
7.5 haha nice opener mixxed...good shit
If some one says ur a vet well they Lied....
when i came out ya hide,ran like a bitch to ya basement inside....
5 hmm not really worded well at all, just not really a good concept...
Weel 3-2 coming in atleast a Couple of wins....
Leave u DisFunctional and Froze like da Sims....
6.5 not bad...not bad...again work on your wording dude...
Well i Chould Tell why ya messed up goin 2 school wit Re-tarts....
The Only Way u get high on The Record is if u put weed on Charts....
5.5 didn't like this bar either...but this is probably one of the best drops ive read of yours...
Yo nigga im usein 10 lines u probley usin them all....
Spit Flowz n ma Punches so hard Leavein this FAke Fall....
6 decent...

you need to still work on wording, and having more meta's in your work...and having smarter punches...but good job man


li...

Kid's hooked on Buck cuz he wont ever make a dollar...
At least not for rapping, until he gives tutorials a holler...
7.5 good shit...solid and yet simple...
What the fuck was that verse, kid ya rushed it...
It was pure shit, thats why voters will flush it...
7.5 another nice bar...
Fuck you kid, thats a better punch than you have used...
I could post ur verse and use it as a punch against you...
8...see that's a nice bar right there...good job so far...
Not a need to try when i already merked this guy...
Didnt try either time, put it simply for him, BYE...
5 didn't like this bar very much..played...
Your out of the tourny, quit the league, elevate son...
Keystyled ya, merked him easily all for a little fun...
6.5 nicely done...you could tell you keystyled it quickly...but yes it was enough to win it...good shit...even though you could tell that you didn't really try your hardest...


VOTE-L.I.

shadow 06-25-04 07:21 AM

mixxxed
your flow was a lil shakey...to be quite honest i wasnt feelin it...
i wasnt feeelin ur whole vrse and they feel like the lines were stretched and words were forced
u had good hard hitting punchlines... but... mostly weak....6.9/10

li ur verse was highly below average.... your flow was good though and i was reallly feelin this verse
even though you had weak punchlines his were weaker... and really you won this one by
the hair on ur nutz....... 7.1/10

so my vote is L.I. for better flow alone
this is my honbest vote... i dont think li is in our crew anymore....
so count this vote good job mizzed mc just come harder next time...

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 06-26-04 10:15 PM

Sorry But L.I. i did a DAmn Keystyle to 3-4 minutes
and u probley to 10-15 yup thaz what i thought

El Eye 06-26-04 10:23 PM

^ lol ok?...

Enygma 06-26-04 11:06 PM

Dumbass typed as fast as he could and thought he would get some sympathy votes....

Vote - L.I..........his verse didn't suck as much


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