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...OpeY... 12-15-03 09:05 PM

TheProphet777 vs. Joebird
 
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Topic: We sized up... We were ready to fight

TheProphet777 12-15-03 09:09 PM

coo ok lets do this shit yo im checking in for this ill drop my link up in 2 days or so peace out GL TO us BOth

Joebird 12-16-03 10:17 AM

wow an oppenent! GL. later.

Joebird 12-17-03 08:20 PM

knockout

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/joebirdmusic.htm

TheProphet777 12-17-03 10:21 PM

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/t...ngliljmusic.htm

quickie...Did it just now...It should be enough to beat his. 1 min spit really fast stuff for me....phew

Tha Duce 12-17-03 10:41 PM

Ok this is the break down

Joe bird-
sounds flat as hell. like the vocals are on the beat, and to low and crapy mic or way over compressed not sure probly crapy mic.
Thou I can understand the lyrics and hear them sum what clearly. pritty good Lyrics, nothing to complain about. Off beat at times Like the production was rushed and not cleaned up. so take your time dawg next time. Not much in change ups. its just flat all the way thou. You should try to add changes or a Hook or somthing. Be Creative in this area, IM sure you put some decent time into lyrics. but if your production is just same all the way thou people will loose intrest. ..... OK I would give this a 5 out of 10....

The Prophett 77-
Ok you have a big problem wit production too, You have mad cliping dawg. and half the time its realy hard to under stand you or hear you. The flow was a touch better then Joe BIrd. and on your vocals you have a deep ass tweeked version of your voice and higher pitch version. and when there going togeter it sounds like crap. It almost sounds like you have the beat so High its to cover up your sub par lyircs. dont know since I cant hear half of them. but what I heard was good just like Joe Bird. I would give this a 4.5 out of 10

OK this was a close one Since I could Hear Joe Bird better and was cleaner even thou it was flat sounding big time. It was more understandable. bolth beat each other in diffrent areas but I think tha bird got this one barly...that is my take..... No Hate

Vote Joe Bird

B.I.Detained 12-18-03 04:12 AM

JoeBird--Nice flow and consistency..you played w/ the beat well and it built up good thru the track. The only downfall was the quality of sound but you still came nice!!! Good fire made in this.

Prophet777--Liked the beat and you has some nice lyrics but the background voice fuked you up a big. The distorsion wasnt a good affect. You sounded aigh and the quality was pretty tight.

Vote-Prophet. altho he had that awfull distorsion he still had a short snappy verse which caught the beat nice.

good battle ya'll...way to kick of the season pz

*MoF* 12-20-03 12:01 PM

Joe bird:

beat was aight...not that good quality....i didnt know when u started to rap......but then..flow was aight as well.....

7/10

Prophet:

cool intro.....cool beat....voice a bit too loud.....
this shit sounded kinda animatin......good job though.......

8/10

so id say this goes to the prophet....

peace!

M.O.C 12-21-03 07:38 PM

okay

joebird
- bad quality,like u said but where's the difference 'tween intro and verse?...now I got it
- nice flow not often off
- whole shit goes "ratatatat" no emotion on this, hard to understand
- beat was aight
- seemed on topic

prophet
- tight beat
- flow was okay but still gotta work on sum parts
- quite on topic
- quality better than joe's but impressive though
- came quite hard I felt it more than joe's

vote=theprophet

...OpeY... 12-22-03 11:03 AM

Prophet wins. Thanks for showing to both. Good Luck in week 2.


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