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Da Link
Chorus Manifest through the soul thought of instinct rhymes dat I spit only made fa human link High jack ya soul, just call me da 9-11 sniper and lead the rightous to justice call me da pied piper lyrical cypher....and the verbal assasin in the flesh I step up to da mic and all i spit is my best success....my rhymes are halitosis cuz i come up wit hot shit defent, now yall niggas must be delirious I can't even take ya challenge dat serious come back wit ya flow in order or come back wit a flow like water pound fa pound, I'm da best heavy weight gun on bate....see me in da streets keep it on da low and watch me rise like yeast for da doe in my eyes all you see is a beast wit da flow you tryin to rhyme ya puttin up a great performance so great you might win a oscar for it but give it up cuz what you lack is da instinct plus you to wack and not strong enough for human link Manifest through the soul thought of instinct rhymes dat I spit only made fa human link |
Yo this was a good piece. it flowed well and the vocab was aiite.
but i've seen better from you before and i 've seen you lay out the structure better. but it was a decent piece in its own right. keep doin your thing.... |
Shit sounded mediocre...........but what was the topic?.....U just seemed to be masterbatin or sumtin when u made this.Cause you were hell-bent on makin urself look good.So is that wat this thing was about?....Urself?Because the title said "Da Link"watever the fuck that is.
And I still want a battle with you. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196589 ^^drop a vote...I left feedback didn't I? OOh and yeah.........I still love you too Miss bootyphat. LOL.. . . . . . :thefinger |
damn ma u flowed very good on diz joint here i would luv 2 collab wit ya on a piece very soon but it was str8 fire, multi'z, metas, & overall is a 9/10 keep writing i c ya potential much luv 2 u
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