Polifick(0-0) vs. Shadow(0-0)
 

deadlines:
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verses due on JULY 7wedsday
votes due by the next saturday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd
bar limits:
4 line min.
16 line max.

checkity check....good luck poliflick...

Check Goood Luck Back...

Polifick

Not 1 Not 2..But 3 Battles VS Wack Newbs Through...
A Vet??When I was Bout 2 Take Yo Spot In Gods Crew...
lol..nice personal
Blow Yo Head Off Yo Shoulders..Spit Yo Words Back at u instead...
Dont R.I.P. Tim Do It 2 Yo Career Cuz Yo lyrics is Dead.....
lol...ok
Only Battled In elavated 3 Times Scared 2 Get His Ass Whipping...
The Only Time You Tight~With~A~Mic Is Setting Up My Equipment....
lol
Lyrics Has Fell....His Punches Just Hanging On the Ledge....
Shadow Cuz He Follows Along...even CopyCat Shadows Edge....
yup a personal..lol
Throw In tha Towel early Retirement Elavation "U Juss Get Worster"...
This Battle Just Like Under Your Username But Just Vise Virsa....
lol...im sure it was a personal but he changed it..lol
Should Change Yo name 2 "L..I"Copy Boy After This Battle Embarassing..
Battling Newbs In FrontLinez....The Only Time You Can Say U a Veteran...
aight..lol
1 Vote 2 votes 3 Votes 4 Votes 5Votes....Damn U deleted....
Go back 2 Frontlinez And Battle Cuz In This Class U defeated...
ok...nice closer

overall this was a solid verse...ive seen some better but nice drop
you had some funny punches and personals..lol made me laugh

Lyrics Has Fell....His Punches Just Hanging On the Ledge....
Shadow Cuz He Follows Along...even CopyCat Shadows Edge....
nice line....


overall:8.0/10



Shadow

he's a hippocrit making fun of people that change there name-
he cant come original..copyin off jay-z...and should bow down in shame-
aight this line was good..lol
at first he was choppa city....lost a couple battles..now his name is polifik-
but when you changed your name u didnt change ur skill so u cant profit-
lol...this line had the potential to be niceevrybody you ask on aol for votes.. always vote for u is that a conspiracy?-
u dickride..and ill pull ur head outa ur ass..so u can see the truth clearly-
lol..okill lash then beat andchoke you with the mic wire... proving u should retire-
ur verses still wouldnt be hott if i covered them in gas and ignited them in fire-
ok line but kinda playedur not gangsta..but ill smash your head of the cement so u know the streets-
u grown accostum to defeats, and ur verses are as bad as brittany spears beats-
LOOOOL...Spears...lolu can thank me later for teaching you respect and brutally beating your ass-
just like ur NBA keystyle ,ur shaq ur not making the points or the pass- (open mic song)
lol..ok
with ur verse god couldnt help you even if you were a preist-
polifick isnt good, tight, ill, nor sick... now just deseased-
ok nice closer

decent drop..but your some of your punches lacked and some could of
been dope...

evrybody you ask on aol for votes.. always vote for u is that a conspiracy?-
u dickride..and ill pull ur head outa ur ass..so u can see the truth clearly-
ok punch but not really hard...

overall:7.6/10

this is only the 2nd round so theres still time to get your thoughts movin

vote-Polifick

Thanx 4 Tha Vote..Uppin...

here's my breakdown...

Kinda Bored So Dropping Early..

Not 1 Not 2..But 3 Battles VS Wack Newbs Through...
A Vet??When I was Bout 2 Take Yo Spot In Gods Crew...
8
Blow Yo Head Off Yo Shoulders..Spit Yo Words Back at u instead...
Dont R.I.P. Tim Do It 2 Yo Career Cuz Yo lyrics is Dead.....
7
Only Battled In elavated 3 Times Scared 2 Get His Ass Whipping...
The Only Time You Tight~With~A~Mic Is Setting Up My Equipment....
9
Lyrics Has Fell....His Punches Just Hanging On the Ledge....
Shadow Cuz He Follows Along...even CopyCat Shadows Edge....
8
Throw In tha Towel early Retirement Elavation "U Juss Get Worster"...
This Battle Just Like Under Your Username But Just Vise Virsa....
6
Should Change Yo name 2 "L..I"Copy Boy After This Battle Embarassing..
Battling Newbs In FrontLinez....The Only Time You Can Say U a Veteran...
8
1 Vote 2 votes 3 Votes 4 Votes 5Votes....Damn U deleted....
Go back 2 Frontlinez And Battle Cuz In This Class U defeated...
8

pretty solid verse...1 wack bar but the rest was pretty good...

now shadows breakdown
he's a hippocrit making fun of people that change there name-
he cant come original..copyin off jay-z...and should bow down in shame-(99 problems)7.5
at first he was choppa city....lost a couple battles..now his name is polifik-
but when you changed your name u didnt change ur skill so u cant profit-
7
evrybody you ask on aol for votes.. always vote for u is that a conspiracy?-
u dickride..and ill pull ur head outa ur ass..so u can see the truth clearly-
7
ill lash then beat andchoke you with the mic wire... proving u should retire-
ur verses still wouldnt be hott if i covered them in gas and ignited them in fire-5.5
ur not gangsta..but ill smash your head of the cement so u know the streets-
u grown accostum to defeats, and ur verses are as bad as brittany spears beats-9.5
u can thank me later for teaching you respect and brutally beating your ass-
just like ur NBA keystyle ,ur shaq ur not making the points or the pass- (open mic song)7
with ur verse god couldnt help you even if you were a preist-
polifick isnt good, tight, ill, nor sick... now just deseased- 8

pretty good also...one line was fire...but 2 or 3 lines were pretty played...you could have had this battle without those lines...goood job though


v-polifick i dropped an honest vote for you guys will you please return the favor in my league match vs. gottass

polifick

Not 1 Not 2..But 3 Battles VS Wack Newbs Through...
A Vet??When I was Bout 2 Take Yo Spot In Gods Crew...
ok opener, nothin special
Blow Yo Head Off Yo Shoulders..Spit Yo Words Back at u instead...
Dont R.I.P. Tim Do It 2 Yo Career Cuz Yo lyrics is Dead.....
wack...
Only Battled In elavated 3 Times Scared 2 Get His Ass Whipping...
The Only Time You Tight~With~A~Mic Is Setting Up My Equipment....
best punch you had right here... decent
Lyrics Has Fell....His Punches Just Hanging On the Ledge....
Shadow Cuz He Follows Along...even CopyCat Shadows Edge....
eh..... wasn't feelin it
Throw In tha Towel early Retirement Elavation "U Juss Get Worster"...
This Battle Just Like Under Your Username But Just Vise Virsa....
use english, jesus
Should Change Yo name 2 "L..I"Copy Boy After This Battle Embarassing..
Battling Newbs In FrontLinez....The Only Time You Can Say U a Veteran...
played punch........
1 Vote 2 votes 3 Votes 4 Votes 5Votes....Damn U deleted....
Go back 2 Frontlinez And Battle Cuz In This Class U defeated...
Herbish, c'mon now..... wack closer

Shadow

he's a hippocrit making fun of people that change there name-
he cant come original..copyin off jay-z...and should bow down in shame-(99 problems)
ok...
at first he was choppa city....lost a couple battles..now his name is polifik-
but when you changed your name u didnt change ur skill so u cant profit-
played concept[b]
evrybody you ask on aol for votes.. always vote for u is that a conspiracy?-
u dickride..and ill pull ur head outa ur ass..so u can see the truth clearly-
[b]decent, sounded mean, so ok...
ill lash then beat andchoke you with the mic wire... proving u should retire-
ur verses still wouldnt be hott if i covered them in gas and ignited them in fire-
ok, basic concept, not too bad though
ur not gangsta..but ill smash your head of the cement so u know the streets-
u grown accostum to defeats, and ur verses are as bad as brittany spears beats-
hmm....
u can thank me later for teaching you respect and brutally beating your ass-
just like ur NBA keystyle ,ur shaq ur not making the points or the pass- (open mic song)
good personal
with ur verse god couldnt help you even if you were a preist-
polifick isnt good, tight, ill, nor sick... now just deseased-
eh closer


I'm going to give this to Shadow, since he came less wack.

vote - Shadow

Damnn Sire Kinda Herbish 4 U 2 vote Against me Cuz I voted Against U Grow Up..

I don't do that, so stfu and quit bitching about a vote

Polifik:
Not 1 Not 2..But 3 Battles VS Wack Newbs Through...
A Vet??When I was Bout 2 Take Yo Spot In Gods Crew...
7.5/10...good personal
Blow Yo Head Off Yo Shoulders..Spit Yo Words Back at u instead...
Dont R.I.P. Tim Do It 2 Yo Career Cuz Yo lyrics is Dead.....
6.5/10...ehhh
Only Battled In elavated 3 Times Scared 2 Get His Ass Whipping...
The Only Time You Tight~With~A~Mic Is Setting Up My Equipment....
8/10....that was tight
Lyrics Has Fell....His Punches Just Hanging On the Ledge....
Shadow Cuz He Follows Along...even CopyCat Shadows Edge....
8.5/10...great punch and play on his name
Throw In tha Towel early Retirement Elavation "U Juss Get Worster"...
This Battle Just Like Under Your Username But Just Vise Virsa....
7/10..decent but coudla been worded better
Should Change Yo name 2 "L..I"Copy Boy After This Battle Embarassing..
Battling Newbs In FrontLinez....The Only Time You Can Say U a Veteran...
7/10...1st line tight..2nd ehhh
1 Vote 2 votes 3 Votes 4 Votes 5Votes....Damn U deleted....
Go back 2 Frontlinez And Battle Cuz In This Class U defeated...
7/10..decent closer

Overall-51.5/70....few bars were ehhh but overall it was dope

Shadow
he's a hippocrit making fun of people that change there name-
he cant come original..copyin off jay-z...and should bow down in shame-(99 problems) 7/10..decent
at first he was choppa city....lost a couple battles..now his name is polifik-
but when you changed your name u didnt change ur skill so u cant profit-
8/10...pretty tight personal
evrybody you ask on aol for votes.. always vote for u is that a conspiracy?-
u dickride..and ill pull ur head outa ur ass..so u can see the truth clearly-
6.5/10...the whole aol concept is played and the 2nd line was meh
ill lash then beat andchoke you with the mic wire... proving u should retire-
ur verses still wouldnt be hott if i covered them in gas and ignited them in fire-
6.5/10...1st bar was ight...2nd ive seen way better fire lines..but still ight
ur not gangsta..but ill smash your head of the cement so u know the streets-
u grown accostum to defeats, and ur verses are as bad as brittany spears beats-
8.5/10....haha pretty tight...aint seen that b4
u can thank me later for teaching you respect and brutally beating your ass-
just like ur NBA keystyle ,ur shaq ur not making the points or the pass- (open mic song)
7.5/10...solid punch and personal
with ur verse god couldnt help you even if you were a preist-
polifick isnt good, tight, ill, nor sick... now just deseased-
7/10...decent

Overall-51/70

this was a pretty dope battle..it was real close..i enjoyed polifiks a lil more and i think his personals were better...good shit from both of you tho props

Vote-Polifik

U Shut Tha Fuck Up Sire U Juss Madd Cuz Deleon Whooped Yo Ass..Take That Fake Flow Back 2 original Faggot...

i was going to vote on this before...so imma vote on this now


polifick:
Not 1 Not 2..But 3 Battles VS Wack Newbs Through...
A Vet??When I was Bout 2 Take Yo Spot In Gods Crew...
Blow Yo Head Off Yo Shoulders..Spit Yo Words Back at u instead...
Dont R.I.P. Tim Do It 2 Yo Career Cuz Yo lyrics is Dead.....
this was a decent opener..nothing special but it was good...i think you were on that 8 mile flow lol....good flow.....nice job 8.5/10
Only Battled In elavated 3 Times Scared 2 Get His Ass Whipping...
The Only Time You Tight~With~A~Mic Is Setting Up My Equipment....
Lyrics Has Fell....His Punches Just Hanging On the Ledge....
Shadow Cuz He Follows Along...even CopyCat Shadows Edge....
lol that was pretty sick lol i was feelin that...good shit lol..it was funny..it was consistant...the shadow line and the tight with mic line were dope 8.5/10
Throw In tha Towel early Retirement Elavation "U Juss Get Worster"...
This Battle Just Like Under Your Username But Just Vise Virsa....
Should Change Yo name 2 "L..I"Copy Boy After This Battle Embarassing..
Battling Newbs In FrontLinez....The Only Time You Can Say U a Veteran...
1 Vote 2 votes 3 Votes 4 Votes 5Votes....Damn U deleted....
Go back 2 Frontlinez And Battle Cuz In This Class U defeated...
the veteran line was played and enuff with at 1,2,3,4 business.....this was a decent closer...............8/10

shadow:
he's a hippocrit making fun of people that change there name-
he cant come original..copyin off jay-z...and should bow down in shame-(99 problems)
at first he was choppa city....lost a couple battles..now his name is polifik-
but when you changed your name u didnt change ur skill so u cant profit-
eww...i wasnt feelin this at all it was all ugly........the punches werent hittin hard at all..and was pretty bad for an opener..but you tried....6.5/10
evrybody you ask on aol for votes.. always vote for u is that a conspiracy?-
u dickride..and ill pull ur head outa ur ass..so u can see the truth clearly-
ill lash then beat andchoke you with the mic wire... proving u should retire-
ur verses still wouldnt be hott if i covered them in gas and ignited them in fire-
last line played....3rd line....doesnt make any sense you ruined it with the "proving u shuld retire part" ...... conspiracy and clearly dont rhyme but they were ok punches..ig euss 6.5/10
ur not gangsta..but ill smash your head of the cement so u know the streets-
u grown accostum to defeats, and ur verses are as bad as brittany spears beats-
u can thank me later for teaching you respect and brutally beating your ass-
just like ur NBA keystyle ,ur shaq ur not making the points or the pass- (open mic song)
with ur verse god couldnt help you even if you were a preist-
polifick isnt good, tight, ill, nor sick... now just deseased-
first line i see u tried to get ur point across but i wasnt feelin it...ii dunno mayn ur punches aint hittin hard in this battle u can do better 7/10

this was polificks win..he had better flow stay consistant his punches were hitting harder his structure was decent.......


vote: polifick

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