Hello!!!
 

hello everyone how is everyone doing!!!!!!


can some1 give me a lil advice on waht im doing wrong or what i should work on!! any feedback good an bad!!


hey now you kno i dont like chris brown but really that ****a can straight up drown.....so you kno what little girl you really need you to calm that down....so b***h you better count down cause im fin to knock you down faster than you go downtown...ima put you under more than 12 feet faster than you can change your bed sheet......im have you beat faster than you beat meat(and i aint talkin bout the kind that you eat)...baby girl my flow is like the front seat you my friend need to go back into your chair seat...baby your rhymes are easier to figure out then trick or treat.....you need to get back from me if you cant stand the heat...child ill eat your rhymes quicker than lunch meat......while you sitting on the backstreet im relaxing in my bedroom suite.....you aint ready for the hotseat ill burn you like a sprinter at a trackmeet



I really want to know what i need to improve and work on....!!!!!!! :help: :help: :help:

ROFL you gotta be kiddin? This is an aliase. Alright Kirk we get it haha. If this is serious then I'm sorry I really am but nothinhg can help that. Burn your blueprints go back to the drawing board.