My First Recording
 

This is just a little verse I wrote for fun. I've only recorded a couple times with people, and this is my first time by myself. What you think?

Just For Fun- Pt. 1

not bad. Lyrics are ok, gets a bit boring through out, sorta starts with a bang then slows gets a bit mellow.
overall this is a cool first recording. Keep it up.

yea when i write it always starts out good, and fades. I'm definitely trying to change that. thanks for the feed.