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cHoPsTiKs 04-10-03 08:57 PM

<<peep>><<need feedback>>
 
everybody knows that ur done now u did it/
ill battle eminem dr.dre and exzibit/
becus my rhymes are so quick and exquisite/
i kud go to jail for this shit, u gunna visit?/
now why you lookin at me like im an ex-con/
ya'll know i get more fuckin pussy then a tampon/
thinkin u big, think that ur a big ass baller/
fuck 50 cent man im the whole fuckin dollar/
battle me and shit, u know im gunna win/
and after im done ill take ur gurl for a spin/
ill get her on her knees, beggin and pleadin/
then ill fuck her virgin clit til shes moanin and bleedin/
ill bang her so hard man u know u kant tap that/
and that my lil posers is the whole fuckin rap/


tell me wut u think........its not that good but tell me wut u thnk anyways........ill post better ones up in a lil......this is just a quikkie, gimme sum feedback...thx

Cesar August 04-10-03 10:01 PM

wattup, werd up...keep coming with it, i like gullyness...hollah, peepmy shit wen i post


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