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KempoMRK 07-10-06 11:01 AM

Mets & Username vs JTR & SPuL
 


Verses Due Friday at 11:59pm Eastern.
Line Limit of 32 Lines Per Team, 16 Lines Each.
You Must Vote On 2 Battles, Votes Will Be Deducted For Each Vote Not Completed.
Votes Due By Sunday Night.
New Battles Posted On Monday Morning.
Biting = Ban.
Feeding = Vote Deduction.
Swaying = Vote Deduction.

J. Luth 07-10-06 11:55 AM

in. 24, 32 ?

JTR 07-10-06 04:27 PM

in, why not just follow the rules

PIC:

UserName 07-10-06 09:21 PM

here, im down for more if both of yall are

i know mets is down for whatever

let us know. pz.

J. Luth 07-10-06 09:32 PM

^yea, new limit is 32 kempo said. Pic battle maybe? if so, make it a recent pic and not one that's been used a lot before

we using pics so here's my pic:

.TeamOne. 07-10-06 10:59 PM

oooh, use MY pic !!!

JTR 07-14-06 05:28 PM

fucking "text sound like audio flow", omg, die spul

J. Luth 07-14-06 07:20 PM

First 8=JTR Second 8= SPuL

Mets




Holy shit?

You're a problem to child labor, but here's what I just can't get
How many chinese kids did it take to fabricate a brim wider then ya fat head?!
F'real, you'll prolly duck the challenge, cuz you know you fear me
And i'd call you out, but you got no fucking ears so I doubt you'd hear me
Pout with tears b, cuz your features don't suit you, watch me wreck this
Cuz those beady fucking eyes'd only look decent on a necklace
So respect this, fuck Mets shit... he'll die when i'm rippin' him
And your pics are so fuckin' small that i'm suprised you fit in them!

soo.........
I heard your girl's a fuckin' slut, loose as fuck, I mean it guy
She known for takin' in a foot... and I ain't talkin' 'bout penis size!
This Fat Joe wannabe champed RM, but his ass aint hurting me
So don't be too bigheaded...
...wait, that would require plastic surgery!
You look like Jarod BEFORE Subway, so I suggest that you go and try it
Cuz you gon be losing, wait, I ain't say you gonna dieyet
Got your hat tipped to the side, but make sure you don't nudge me, bud
Even your damn hat's....
... tryin' to run away from your ugly mug!

haha... NEXT!!

Username



Whoa!
I'll keep a few feet back, I don't wanna be a black and blue disaster
Cuz those mutton chops could probably beat the shit out of a kung-fu master
HA, you fucking joking Pinnochio? No doubt ima nail him
That killer triangle ya nose forms makes Bermuda's look safe to sail in
In this you'll fail bitch... then get sonned, like an orphan, kid
Those caterpillar eyebrows look like they're going through metamorphisis
I'm whoring kids, and i'm giving these lames a fight
You rocked the goatee and now farm animals are ashamed for life!

You mothafuckas is ugly, like Robkilla!

haha yea son..

We already know your nose is far out ahead, but everybody look again
Your fuckin' chin's trying to make a race out of it. Shit, either one could win
User ain't wanna respect his elders? shitttt.... now you've done it dude
OF COURSE my skill's apparent, I mean we all see how I'm sonnin' you
Your style is soo outdated, kid, and I don't mean to bitch
But your nose is so far out... it'd make a hippie start to trip
Wtf is up with the wardrobe? This ain't Star Wars but, kid hey...
OF course you ARE the one with the force...
... in every single one of your wordplays!

EZ

V-DUBS WHAT?!?! BITCHEZ!

JTR 07-14-06 11:36 PM

ok ok, extension,.

Don't do this to us guys, John Hensley no-showed us last round, so you guys HAVE to show, k? K?! :mad:

J. Luth 07-15-06 01:40 AM

word up, y'all get extention. we ain't gettin' no final 4 appearance by all no-shows LOL

Brock Sampson 07-15-06 07:06 PM

^say what?? It just might look that way....geez

JTR 07-15-06 08:17 PM

Holy shit, that's wack.

Anyone wanna feedback our verses? I'll RTF with a vote on your battle.

J. Luth 07-15-06 10:19 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Brock Sampson
^say what?? It just might look that way....geez

^lol i know for real. so many no-shows. fuck it.

yea, somebody atleast give us some feed or something.

Feeble Minded 07-15-06 11:37 PM

You guys actually had decent verses. Its obvious to me you're both inexperienced with pic battles, and i'm NOT saying that to diss you... some of the lines here were surprisingly fresh & good... but some were your typical "you can find these type lines in any pic battle vs. a guy with a big head etc" lines. Anyway, feed coming

Feeble Minded 07-15-06 11:44 PM

You're a problem to child labor, but here's what I just can't get
How many chinese kids did it take to fabricate a brim wider then ya fat head?!
Decent, good concept just.. not that hard of a diss

F'real, you'll prolly duck the challenge, cuz you know you fear me
And i'd call you out, but you got no fucking ears so I doubt you'd hear me
Lol.

Pout with tears b, cuz your features don't suit you, watch me wreck this
Cuz those beady fucking eyes'd only look decent on a necklace
You're stretching, he doesn't really have beady eyes.

So respect this, fuck Mets shit... he'll die when i'm rippin' him
And your pics are so fuckin' small that i'm suprised you fit in them!
Typical pic line. no

soo.........
I heard your girl's a fuckin' slut, loose as fuck, I mean it guy
She known for takin' in a foot... and I ain't talkin' 'bout penis size!
no. corny concept, corny, corny, corny, please don't diss people for their "girl" that you prolly never heard anything about, obviously fake personals are a turn off to the voters, trust me.

This Fat Joe wannabe champed RM, but his ass aint hurting me
So don't be too bigheaded...
...wait, that would require plastic surgery!
wording is way off of what you intended to say

You look like Jarod BEFORE Subway, so I suggest that you go and try it
Cuz you gon be losing, wait, I ain't say you gonna dieyet
no.

Got your hat tipped to the side, but make sure you don't nudge me, bud
Even your damn hat's....
... tryin' to run away from your ugly mug!
typical stuff

haha... NEXT!!

Username



Whoa!
I'll keep a few feet back, I don't wanna be a black and blue disaster
Cuz those mutton chops could probably beat the shit out of a kung-fu master
ok
HA, you fucking joking Pinnochio? No doubt ima nail him
That killer triangle ya nose forms makes Bermuda's look safe to sail in
typical stuff, in the fact that its not very creative

In this you'll fail bitch... then get sonned, like an orphan, kid
Those caterpillar eyebrows look like they're going through metamorphisis
his eyebrows look normal to me, and really, this was a "forced" concept anyway...

I'm whoring kids, and i'm giving these lames a fight
You rocked the goatee and now farm animals are ashamed for life!
not a good diss, you're saying its shameful to rock a goatee...why? where's the diss..? why does his goatee look so terrible..? you have to quickly point these things out in your lines for them to be effective

You mothafuckas is ugly, like Robkilla!

haha yea son..
We already know your nose is far out ahead, but everybody look again
Your fuckin' chin's trying to make a race out of it. Shit, either one could win
typical
User ain't wanna respect his elders? shitttt.... now you've done it dude
OF COURSE my skill's apparent, I mean we all see how I'm sonnin' you
played
Your style is soo outdated, kid, and I don't mean to bitch
But your nose is so far out... it'd make a hippie start to trip
ok
Wtf is up with the wardrobe? This ain't Star Wars but, kid hey...
OF course you ARE the one with the force...
... in every single one of your wordplays!
played


I'm not going to leave feedback for shit I thought was good, and if i thought it was ok, chances are I will point out what I didn't like about it moreso than what I did like about it. that way u can improve off of what I didn't like. anyway, it seems like I didn't like it much from the feed, but it actually was a good read. unexpected, but nice job

pz


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