one of my quicks on my mixtape -look around me
here it goes
look around me..see the environment god placed me in// Every man for themselves in a town that got laced in sin// Crews getting homicidal over some hasty racist thing// Won't think twice to leave a hole in the place that your face was in// Its been ages since i seen a community stick together// But this plague can't touch us..immunity's here forever// Cos where im from..aint shit pretty..enjoyment we lose// Just alcoholics, bassheads and long unemployment queue's// I refrain from smoking woo's..stay away from drunken crews// Tried keeping my head in school and spit to bumping tunes// I've been in crack houses seen parents who've spoiled a lot// Swap feeding their kids for Coca Cola bottles with the foil on top// Babies crawling around..dodging doors falling from the hinges// To think their first steps could catch them aids from sarynges// A local teen murks a man unintentionally but gets respect// Then gets trapped in this dimension that we just cannot accept// Guys need a second chance..should be U-turns to this rocky road// Try teaching disciplin to people who self-learnt to cock and load// Then let the glock explode..........innocents flock or fold// So much error in society and all the law says is 'do what you're told'// Fuck the old..i see the future and its brighter than tomorrow// So to the urban FRONTing line..ima fight until you follow// Trust me i've seen shit..and i defend those rooks who get clowned// When will the guns and hooks get put down..grab a book to get found// Or be stuck on them staircases..grab a spoon..cook them browns// You can write whatever in raps but is it there when you look around?// |
It was decent u I give it a 6.5/10 keep elevatin
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this is a decent drop . You got your flow on nice. You had nice end line rhyme's in it. 7/10.
But on a diferant note . What's that "tha god' mean in your sig. Are you god? ..lol... pz |
waddup thats hot n so true ive seen way too much of that shit so i like it cuz it's real
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yo thanks for tha feed cuzz im tryn my best to elevate so holla
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HOLLA fam...
that shit was D.O.P.E nice flow, good topic u stuck to it, slick with each lines preey deep at parts where i felt where u was coming from N all around tight... 8.0 HOLLA... V.T |
keep uppin this peeps holla.............................
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