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Replay 10-09-04 10:45 AM

Elusiv G vs A.K.A.
 
Battle Rules:

6 - 16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate Votes
No D/R Votes
lets go:

Minimum posts to vote: 150

Check in by: 10-12-04 at 10:45 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 10-09-04 12:56 PM

Elusiv G has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-09-04 12:56 PM.

System 10-10-04 09:11 AM

A.K.A. has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-10-04 09:11 AM.

Acuity 10-12-04 12:17 PM

On RV, uve changed crew many timez,
no1 wants u in there family, due your weak rhymez//

Your rhymes A.K.A shit,over-rated and wack, amongst elevated niggaz
Your 50th brigade boyz, are bitches claimin to be gangland figgaz//

your rite behind me with a gun to ma head
well ma council boyz behind you pumpin u full of led//

50th brigade, y'all sum unorganised niggaz actin like pigs
Been up and runnin 4 time, and all yo memberz still aint got a uniform sig//

15years old, telling us your hobbies are fucking and shagging
Your 15, ur dick aint devloped enough for truth 2 be behind ur bragging//

your crew forum got mo sticky incursions, than a porno shoot
crew memberz less active than a one legged man, with only one boot//

Ma nigga empire came in yo forum askin about this crew battle joke
You niggaz shudnt b testin council, u b left up in smoke//

you shud be a.k.a as a bitch,your crew as hoes, testin tha council
you be left dead and cheked, like bugs bunny hit by an anville//

Replay 10-12-04 09:20 PM

dawg you pay my songs to hear the sound of music but all you hear is the sound of a bang//
Cause i'm bringing home the "W" like i was part of the wu tang clan//
I'ma take you down wit an army of one... wait you didn't no i'm the alias king?//(a.k.)
you think you can battle against me well i guess i'm have to give you some counciling//
i got your whole crew bouncing thats why kats call me trampalean//
I bust tips it octuber that y cats call it hollow wean//
i ain't cassidy but i'm still make you scream//(like ahh)
if you a "g" it must stand for girl cause you a chike that love sucking dick//
this ain't no crew battle. i talk to emp he said you ain't part of his clique//
boy you should just retire from the game like j and dj quick//
you drop shit knowing that you gonna die like jumping from the top of the tower//
the way i clush the mic you mistake it as a superhero's power//
damn look you ego just shuck like you been taking cold shower//
so come back and rap to this or declare yourself a fucking coward//

Replay 10-12-04 09:24 PM

ok lets get votes on this bitch you no this was a cuntcil verse 50th brigade battle crew battle. some yun guns taking out the top crew.

Implicit 10-12-04 10:17 PM

Voted For: A.K.A.

a.k.a definitely won this with hard hitting punches and attackin the crew. elusiv ur verse was kinda weak. i seriously dont know how u got in the council. no hate jus my opinion. ur flow was good both had a nice flow to their verses. but ima have to go with a.k.a based on the punches and personals

Replay 10-13-04 04:45 PM

lets get these votes people. no need to sleep.....

Replay 10-13-04 05:22 PM

yall cats better start voting cause i want this closed

Replay 10-14-04 05:52 PM

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C.C.C.P. 10-14-04 07:51 PM

This was feedback posted for A.K.A.
 
ok i got my alias upping this battle since i can only do it every three hours

Replay 10-14-04 08:58 PM

if you got 150 post vote on this shit come on and i sorry i stopped all your little newb friends from voting for you lolol

Un'Touched 10-14-04 09:40 PM

Voted For: A.K.A.

Aight A.K.A Got This

Both Verses Were Kinda Weak But Ima Have Ta Give It To AKA.
Even Tho Your Structure Was A Lil Stretched Some Places Your Punches Hit Hard And Your Flow Was On.NIce Verse. Vocab Was Aight Metas And Multis Aight. But Your Closer Was Pretty Hott

Elusiv G-
Your Verse Was Aight. Your Structure Was Nice But Your Punches Just Didnt Seem Ta Hit As Hard As His..Nice Verse Tho I Liked You Closer..

Opener-AKA
Closer-Tie
Metas-TIE
Multis-TIE
Vocab-Elusive
Structure-ELUSIV
Flow-AKA
Personals-AKA
Punches-AKA
Vote=AKA

Un'Touched 10-14-04 09:43 PM

Yo Fuck Lol I Didnt KNow This Shit Was Crew Battle They Just Said Vote On This With An Honost Vote And I Just Read The Verses I Cant Vote Cus IM IN The Council

Nynth Degree 10-14-04 10:38 PM

Voted For: A.K.A.

Ok, Elusiv had better structure first of all. A.K.A your lines were a little stretched at times, work on shortening them down. Elusiv, your punches were a little weak, and you had some played concepts. Voting is opinionated, and in my opinion talking blatently about guns is played...You didn't really come with any wordplay either, and this was just about the only good punch in your verse:
15years old, telling us your hobbies are fucking and shagging
Your 15, ur dick aint devloped enough for truth 2 be behind ur bragging//
And when it came to your finisher, council and anvil don't rhyme, just letting you know...
A.K.A you came with some aight wordplay, I was feeling the "Hollow wean" line, but other than that you were kinda lacking in the wordplay. As far as punches, it didn't look like you put much effort into them, but this was your best one...
if you a "g" it must stand for girl cause you a chike that love sucking dick//
this ain't no crew battle. i talk to emp he said you ain't part of his clique//
V// A.K.A

(For future referrence kids, don't put the "//" at the end of your lines, it's newbish)
Return the favor at one of the links in my sig, honest explained votes only...


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