MConcise - You cant catch us (My Verse)
 

Please do not say "this is way to short". If you would read
the title you will notice it is only my verse! Its not a fucking
song, its just one verse.
Its just the rough draft, did it real quick sittin down with no
pop filter. Sounds pretty dope though!

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Cise

Cise Is Back Aha!

Flow Is Pretty Nice, Lyrics Are Nice
Quality Pretty Nice,

Pretty Nice Verse

pZ.

not bad g, flows quite tight words sound a bit scripted....nice verse tho overall......ElavatE

PeacE
OUTLAW

Thanks yo..
And to jae.. Lol ya I aint spit in a while. Im mad rusty
and just tryin to elevate. Good looks....

Cise

Flow is presty solid the beat nice and shit of course the lyrics are solid the delivery still needs a little work keep at it.

Thanks, up

Yo it wuz stright dogg.......You need a lil work tho....You gotta put more.....like feeling into iT....Like really mean wut you say........It's jus somethings missing......i thinks its tha Flow.....Tha lyric's were stright.......na-mean.....jus work on dat flow and They way you deliver dem Barz.............

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yo, this joint was pretty cool...i just say the only problem is how u try to stretch a few end rhymes to conform to the beat...just simply add in a few more words so your bars are precise wit the beat...other then that, i like how the clarity sounds...very good quality yo...holla back...
oNE...

Thanks for all the feedback yo! I will take it
and see what I can do with it. More feedback
is always welcome. Thanks..

Cise

Dog, that was pretty nice. I like it. I can't wait for tha audio battle.

First, delivery was on point 80%. A little more umph in tha voice, sound wise, would of made it worth while. Your voice is very nice. It sounds like u was making love 2 tha beat. Thats what u wanna do to a song. Fukk Tha Shit Out That Song. Tha beat made it all though.

But, there really is no buts. I just think you verse should of been longer. U left me hanging. Don't leave me hanging on tha audio battle. Hottness

Overall 8 out of 10

Thanks for the reply. And I will "leave you hangin"
in the audio battle. Hehe!

Cise

Thanks for the feedback and peepage. I am currently
uploading the full version of the track, with verses from
Lucid and Endovidual (Mind). Nothing special, but I
just produced a beat for us, we have studio time on
sunday at 2:30.

Cise

Closing this thread since the full version is up...